Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problem to the public.
One of current affairs that has make people worried about news on the media like TV, newspapers, the internet and so on is correctness of them which could lead to several problems in societies and there are recent debates over whether the media are less concerned about the accuracy of its news than in the past. Different people hold various opinions due to their distinct backgrounds and perspectives. Some people may hold the opinion that the media make individuals aware of what is happening in a society and their news are correct but other have a negative attitude. As a matter of fact, the issue of validity of news on the media is so complicated and controversial that it is impossible to find a universal answer to this question. Nevertheless, I endorse that, to some extent I am agree with the opinion of second group that these news are incorrect and cause some problems to the public. In order to substantiate my vantage points, I would like to address some key evidences; these news are just for attracting more reader for making more money, and also; taking control of people’s thoughts to do their purposes.
In the first place, authors and writer that work for media are going to absorb more customers for earning more money and just think about their profit and do not care about accuracy of news. They use strange news and words only for both make news attractive and interesting for reading and make questions in people’s mind to buy their products. For example, in our society individuals and companies on media compete together and use different designs and many controversial news just to make themselves dominant in society and attract many people to purchase their products.
Along with the same line, another privilege of the aforementioned idea; the media press want people in a society think in a particular way and control people that arouse many obstacles in societies. For instance, there are several religions in our country but governors are going to neglect some of them so they want the media press to write and make stories, films and so forth about them and make them unimportant which trigger and angry people. Thus, in this situation there are many opponent religious groups in our country and people are not good together that want to kill each other.
To put the issue into perspective, by taking into account these entire aspects, nowadays the accuracy of news are not important for the media. Because they want to fallow their goals even though it make some problems in societies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 790, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ss, I endorse that, to some extent I am agree with the opinion of second group that t...
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Line 1, column 834, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...e with the opinion of second group that these news are incorrect and cause some problems t...
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Line 1, column 986, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...uld like to address some key evidences; these news are just for attracting more reader for...
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Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much controversial news', 'a good deal of controversial news'.
Suggestion: much controversial news; a good deal of controversial news
... together and use different designs and many controversial news just to make themselves dominant in soc...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...nt to fallow their goals even though it make some problems in societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60034802329 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7894895507 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.428571429 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261997942856 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929145299578 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721759524956 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150680580983 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826008370093 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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