From the early stages of our lives, we go to school and spend most of our time with our friends and teachers. In time, those people become the ones that we see the most and classes become our room. Obviously, our characters are shaped or reformed by the people that are not in our family. Personally, I believe that teachers have more impact on our life than our friends. The main reasons of my declaration will be explained in this short essay.
First of all, our education life start from the kinder garden and we start to realize that we are capable of built, draw, shape, make things and our tendency to different pallets can get recognized. Yes, the kids share their play time with their friends but, the teachers who show how to behave, be kind, responsible, share and be a nice person. The children are dough and the teachers try to give them the best form as much as they can. Because, they can observe you during the day and contact with you, your family or responsible people to help or improve you.
Secondly, from the middle school and forward, our teachers are eagerly want to give the best education and advices to built our lives on our desires. Sometimes it could be hard for them however, it is like a natural instinct for them to open a way to find ourselves. Another important point of this matter is that, in some undesired cases such as being bullied for any reason, being uncomfortable in some conditions can be solved by a help from our teachers. They guide us and encourage to heal. Friends can't be there for us when we need them because they are not strong or powerful enough to lead us. I believe many of us have a teacher that we are grateful for and we try to approach to others with the same sincere senses. On the other hand, our friends may have difficulties in their life and they wouldn't even realize or care about our concerns and etc. From my point of view, friendships may differ in time and the criteria that we are looking for a friendship may change so, the only one we can count on in stable is our teachers. Because, everyone wants the best for themselves and trusting a teacher and listening to his/her word is the key.
Thirdly, when we are becoming young adults, our professors become our lighter and guidance. We open up about our concerns in life or else and they express their feelings and tell their stories about their experiences to give an idea about the context so that we would know that we are not alone. As we know, life is a race so if we want to win this race we need to keep on running on the right path. There could be times that there is no one around you that you can rely on but your teacher. Those times we realize better their significance. Moreover, they could be a reference to us to find a job, get a scholarship, be a part of a project and so on. Hence, we might obtain a chance that we can not reach by ourselves. With the gathered memories from our professors, we make this influence chain go longer.
As a conclusion, I believe only our teachers can look at the situations by taking no sides, our teachers are so valuable that we can be influenced from them for a life time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'wanted'.
Suggestion: wanted
...l and forward, our teachers are eagerly want to give the best education and advices ...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'healing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: healing
...r teachers. They guide us and encourage to heal. Friends cant be there for us when we n...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...guide us and encourage to heal. Friends cant be there for us when we need them becau...
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Line 3, column 803, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ave difficulties in their life and they wouldnt even realize or care about our concerns...
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Line 3, column 851, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...even realize or care about our concerns and etc. From my point of view, friendships may ...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...at we can be influenced from them for a life time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 106.0 43.0788530466 246% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2564.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 586.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37542662116 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3713678007 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462457337884 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 795.6 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.157891127 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.962962963 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7037037037 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85185185185 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134411127499 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460167600737 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526683535249 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09492026744 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428357328786 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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