Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s world business, effective relations with having enough insight play an essential role in guiding a company through success. this issue has raised a lot of controversy among people, a host of people reject the importance of relations and connect the success to being a knowledgeable person, while others feasible this success only by governing efficient relations. From my vantage point, relations play a critical role in this way by explaining it in the following paragraphs.
First, making potent bonds with other influential persons in business and also politician lead you and your country to grasp precious opportunities. Assume you have an international company that is avid to trade and negotiate with other big companies around the world to gain more wealth along with more reputation. If you are succeeded in making unbreakable relations and promises with key persons in mentioned companies and positions, then you have passed most of the way to be a prosperous person to debut a trade with them and develop yourself and your company as well. Although having good knowledge and being an insight person is useful, but it does not play the chief factor to make these powerful bonds that just came with dense meetings and debates which concluded to a fine result.
From another perspective, making appropriate relations within a company in a business in a form of hierarchy, can convert your team to a consolidate network that boost your goals and visions to achieve success. For instance, if one is able to create a form of equity in his or her company by making good relations with them in form of some incentives or some extra compensation at the end of each month in relation to their hard work, you can always be sure that they support you and your decisions in even harsh conditions. Although having these kind of relations and making them need enough knowledge that somewhat gained from school or university, this cannot work solely if you are not able to exploit these relations with the experience of different kinds of connections that you made earlier. Thus, building useful relations inside a company that is going to run a business is definitely recommended.
All in all, in light of the aforementioned reasons, having knowledge and being expert in a field of study is very useful, but, the key role in making a business and a job successful is to strengthen relations and negotiations with others who are important players in business and economy and also politics to heighten your yield in an effort to be a reach and prosperous person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... of hierarchy, can convert your team to a consolidate network that boost your goals and visio...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... even harsh conditions. Although having these kind of relations and making them need enoug...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24678111588 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.141630901288 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107296137339 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0364806866953 0.046263068375 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0536480686695 0.0685040099705 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139484978541 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0515021459227 0.0351676179071 146% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7991730052 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0364806866953 0.0309702414327 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0987124463519 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00643776824034 0.0209618222197 31% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0128755364807 0.0139019557991 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2581.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 432.0 408.028673835 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97453703704 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363425925926 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273148148148 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194444444444 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141203703704 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7991730052 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 59.0524987498 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5533526081 175% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.4542658216 48.84282405 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 215.083333333 120.699889404 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.5533526081 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.644075263715 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 63.3148148148 45.7405998639 138% => OK
Elegance: 1.88888888889 1.45489161554 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411356039764 0.300154397459 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135301116149 0.103427244359 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0741617334189 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.630672059865 0.497263757937 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152450416821 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189127551431 0.114077575197 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726885191311 0.0781384742642 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.344170730225 0.336927656856 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0852847751428 0.067059652881 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288044840971 0.210909579961 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054646560479 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.