Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often viewed as a bad quality for a person to have but in fact it is a good quality for a person to have Use specific reasons and examples to suppo | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often viewed as a bad quality for a person to have,but,in fact,it is a good quality for a person to have.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Decision making is of utmost importance in life. During our life we make several choices that can affect our lives for better or worse. therefore, there have been debates about whether it is a better quality for someone to make important decisions instantly or wait for a long time to make their decisions. I believe it is better to wait for some time to make important decisions. I will discuss my reasons in the following essay.
First, we cannot dicussing our options with others if we make a hasty decision. By waiting we can discuss our decisions and ask opinions of people with experience this action results in wise decision. For example, after taking university exams I was unsure about which major to choose. By visiting psychologists and talking to different acquenteces about their field of work I concluded that I have talent in the field of mathematics and a Computer Science is a field that is in high demand around the world, which would make it easier for me to find a job or immigrate to other countries. Hence, I chose Computer as my major and got accepted to an excellent university. Therefore, researching in this period of time gave me the foresight to choose the best option and I have been happy with my choice in the last eight years.
Second, taking time can lessen the possibility of regret. By taking time we can ensure we wouldn't be swayed by temporary emotions and can make rational decisions. For example, when there is a sale in a website or a store we may see the products getting sold one after another and suppose we may buy things without any research and without considering whether the item is worth the price, would we need it, or would it be usable. Afterward, when the product is delivered we may find the product of no use or too expensive. but the product has already been bought and it can't be returned. based on this example, there is a high chance for us humans to make impulsive decisions and then regret them after it's too late.
In conclusion, I believe it is better to make important decisions after thinking for a long while, so we wouldn't be swayed by temporary feelings and can discuss our options with experienced people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Suggestion: period
...versity. Therefore, researching in this period of time gave me the foresight to choose the bes...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...regret. By taking time we can ensure we wouldnt be swayed by temporary emotions and can...
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Suggestion: But
...the product of no use or too expensive. but the product has already been bought and...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... product has already been bought and it cant be returned. based on this example, the...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64248704663 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59047667646 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9232762294 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215954502444 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771229909001 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599567877542 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144084659535 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710459055209 0.0645574589148 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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