Do You Agree Or Disagree With The Following Statement? Television Has Destroyed Communication Among Friends And Family. Use Specific Reasons and Examples To Support Your Opinion
Technology has been developing over a period of time which it offers people new brand tools. Television is one of the tools that technology contributed to peoples` daily life. In my opinion, television is one of the worst mediums that has significantly bad effects on our communication among friends and family, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, television kills the interaction among family members which, I mean that family members are not communicating enough because of TV as they were communicating a lot before TV comes to their home. In my neighborhood, everyone has at least one TV in their homes, I said "at least" because I know lots of families that own more than two televisions in their homes. I can recall when we had no TV in our house, me and my siblings were playing amazing games, having precious times and enjoying the childhood things. However, whenever we purchased a TV, we ceased to play games and watched cartoons on TV all day long, so it took our all interaction with each other and made us like robots that don`t aware of the other family members at home.
Furthermore, it also damages the relationship between friends. My own experience is a good example of this. When I miss my friends, I go to their house to have a couple of tea and chat about the things of our lives. However, once we open TV while we talk to each other about our lives, the subject suddenly changes and turns into the things about what we watch on TV. For example, if we watch magazine news on TV, we find ourselves making comments about famous peoples` lives. So, TV really hurts the communication among friends as well as the family.
Owing to all the reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that television damages our relationships and upset our communication between our families and friends. I think the life was better before TV comes into our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
Technology has been developing over a period of time which it offers people new brand tools....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, while, at least, for example, i mean, i think, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7921686747 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8001925234 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9771381905 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.066666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113154588288 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473494224868 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682014075308 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789894681374 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401041300358 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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