Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the belief that it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than work slowly and carefully is becoming very common. Of course, it is good to finish a job as fast as possible; however, I believe that quality is better than quantity. Hence, I counter the notion that working quickly and carelessly is better than slowly and meticulously. I would like to present my reason for this belief as following:
Firstly, as everything is developing in today's world, it is no doubts that quality of the products should be put in priority. As the economy is growing, people expect to receive the best of every thing. Take the sale of phones for example, customers nowadays no longer pursing the trend alone, they start noticing the quality of the products. Hence, many cell phones branches are taking a lot time testing the usefulness of the products and trying to make them as develop and perfect as possible. Another example can be taken from the market of food. Many companies once tried to skip some certain process and using chemicals; however, once found out by customers and authority, these food companies were soon shut down and punished harshly for their hasty decision. Indeed it is crucial in every aspect pf today's world that mistakes be avoided by working slowing and carefully.
Secondly, working quickly and carelessly often result in undesirable consequences. The more mistakes produced by one is likely to deprive him of other's respects. One example is the story of my cousin, after graduating from university, he got accepted to work as an accountant in a company. However, just after a few months and careful work he began to rush on it. He started finishing his job early so that he could get home soon. As a result, he got fired one year after due to the poor quality of his work.
It is clear that speed is an important factor of success in today's world. Nevertheless, when speed is associated with mistakes then it turns into a bad quality. Hence, it is better to be slow and careful rather than fast and risky. Because, in the end it is better late then sorry.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many cells
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Suggestion: Indeed,
...ished harshly for their hasty decision. Indeed it is crucial in every aspect pf todays...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and careful rather than fast and risky. Because, in the end it is better late then sorr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'of course', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20243902439 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.178048780488 0.158761421928 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0658536585366 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.1 0.046263068375 216% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0609756097561 0.0685040099705 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124390243902 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0585365853659 0.0351676179071 166% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53505591163 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0268292682927 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00487804878049 0.00188951952338 258% => OK
Determiners: 0.0756097560976 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00975609756098 0.0209618222197 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00487804878049 0.0139019557991 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2107.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 367.0 408.028673835 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74114441417 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367847411444 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25340599455 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152588555858 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0926430517711 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53505591163 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561307901907 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.2949354891 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.35 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1910341585 48.84282405 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.35 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.35 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 43.690599455 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.13669064748 1.45489161554 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434402879531 0.300154397459 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109619648894 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0539339409618 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.483097668332 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122307664369 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16142540631 0.114077575197 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103789276121 0.0781384742642 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.282826291102 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0652095616538 0.067059652881 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312179869012 0.210909579961 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812943741494 0.0618886996521 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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