do you agree or disagree with the following statement? in today's world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Since the dawn of civilization, people have always been trying to make the best decision for themselves and their societies. It is important to mention that almost during all the documented history, the process of decision making remained with no noteworthy change. However, one of the most important milestones of recent decades is the changes that had accrued in the process of decision making and peoples' perspective in this regard. A controversial question which is often raised regarding these changes is about the advantages and disadvantages old way and new one.
Some people are inclined toward this opinion that it is better to work slowly and make sure that everything is perfect, so they prefer the old ways in this regard. On the other hand, others look at this debate through different lens and think that it is better to take a risk and make quick decision. Personally, I am more in agreement with those who prefer the quick process of decision making. In the following paragraph, three conspicuous reasons will cogently substantiate my perspective.
The first noteworthy point regarding the issue is the high-speed tempo of life in today's world. World has changed, and thanks to unbelievable technological advances, something that in the past could take one year now can be done in just few days. Because of this shift in daily life, I am with this opinion that it is better to be consistence with life speed and made speedy decisions. For instance, imagine that you are faced with the question of whether accept an offer for a job in another city or not. In the past you definitely had enough time to spend it on different aspects of this offer, but now you do not have this option. If you waist too much time to study the offer, that will withdraw this offer and you will lose your chance.
Another reason which deserves some words here is the highly competitive atmosphere of today’s life. You must remember that today the number of people who have similar conditions and skills and ability, is much more than past. If in the last century the number of people who could have done something especial was for example 100, now this number is maybe more than 1 million. Therefore, you can see that practically you do not have the time for long ponder, because somebody else is waiting to snatch away your opportunity. Mu brother is a skilled worker in welding, and I remember that about two years ago he received a job offer in this field. He spent a lot of time to study this offer and to compare its merits. However, when he decided to accept the offer, the employee answered that because of his delay another skilled worker was assigned to this job, and he had lost his chance.
Finally, in addition to what was mentioned above, as recent studies have revealed, the percentage of people who had succeeded with the use of risk-taking technique is much higher than others techniques, including spending a lot of time to investigate the situations. In fact, a study which was conducted in the USA on more than one thousand successful CEO, revealed that roughly 80 percent of these people make their trade-related decision in the first day after they are faced with the challenge. Moreover, the result of the same study revealed that although the risk of this technique is high, the value of its possible outcome is far more, and it is completely logical to take this risk.
To make a long story short, all the aforementioned reasons lead me to the conclusion that in today's world, it is better to accept the risk and make the decision with much more speed. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are some reasons and examples, challenging the claim, which are not mentioned above. Hence, it is suggested that a survey be conducted to find out the exact factors involved in this debate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...stance, imagine that you are faced with the question of whether accept an offer for a job in another ci...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'as for', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221009549795 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.160982264666 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0736698499318 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0572987721692 0.046263068375 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0491132332879 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129604365621 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0354706684857 0.0351676179071 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59880069652 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272851296044 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00272851296044 0.00188951952338 144% => OK
Determiners: 0.114597544338 0.0887237588012 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0109140518417 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177353342428 0.0139019557991 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3827.0 2387.08602151 160% => OK
No of words: 664.0 408.028673835 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76355421687 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07623851424 4.48200974243 113% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323795180723 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236445783133 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16265060241 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103915662651 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59880069652 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 314.0 212.727598566 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472891566265 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 59.5771639392 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5925925926 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7748554271 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.740740741 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5925925926 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.703703703704 0.644075263715 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.2371709058 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.44387755102 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433119627822 0.300154397459 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127358658019 0.103427244359 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0758777966617 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531247552354 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124844719996 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165348234772 0.114077575197 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664499764343 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.44868920161 0.336927656856 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0416317744258 0.067059652881 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301672320479 0.210909579961 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445603349042 0.0618886996521 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 18.0 8.42114695341 214% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 25.0 13.6433691756 183% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.