Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past
Since the dawn of civilizations, education have played significant role in societies. In the meantime, it is essential to note that two of the most important column of education system are teachers and students. During history interaction between these two always have had great impact on education system. However, a controversial question which is often raised regarding education is related to quality of this relationship. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that nowadays students do not respect their tutors like old time; while others look at this debate through a different lens. Personally I am more in agreement with the former one. In the following paragraphs, three conspicuous reasons will cogently substantiate my perspective.
The first noteworthy point regarding the issue is the topic of respect, itself. I believe that contemporary young people do not value their elder much, and it is not only limited to the education. In fact, i am sure all of you have had encounter with different kind of this unethical manner. This bad behavior is evident in the way in which young adult treat other person in their daily life. For example, in the past it was a norm for young men and women to give their sits in buses and subways to young children or people with disability, but today all of us have experience regarding the opposite behavior. Hence, this kind of moral decadence has opened her way to schools and in interaction between students and teachers.
Another reason which deserves some words here is advertisement of mass media. One study in Denmark investigated ten popular TV channels, concerning features of successful teenagers. The result of study shows that according to them, one of the significant properties of successful people is their disrespectfulness. The noteworthy fact is that most of the time children and teenagers who are people of school age, choose their role models according to the prototypes introduced in media. They think that behavior shown in media are the proper manners of a modern teenager, therefore they try to mimic them. Hence we are faced with degradation of moral index in their daily life, especially in interactions with parents and teachers.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance, they are by no means the only reasons available. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind, and that is the policy to make schools, a more unofficial environment. Studies which have been done in recent decades show that when students are placed in formal situations their learning capacities decline noticeably. So, theorists of educational science advice policy makers to equip schools and educational facilities with quiet friendly atmosphere. This policy leads to creation of somehow informal relationship between teachers and their pupils. As a result, young people in schools, unlike their previous generation, do not treat their elders quiet so formally.
To make a long story short, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that nowadays Young people do not respect their teachers like before. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are some other reasons and examples, challenging the claim, which are not mentioned above. Finally, it is suggested that a survey be conducted to find out the exact factors involved in this issue.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258592471358 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.150572831424 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0981996726678 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0474631751227 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0490998363339 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122749590835 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0409165302782 0.0351676179071 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84798684412 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0245499181669 0.0309702414327 79% => OK
Particles: 0.00163666121113 0.00188951952338 87% => OK
Determiners: 0.0932896890344 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00327332242226 0.0209618222197 16% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0196399345336 0.0139019557991 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3404.0 2387.08602151 143% => OK
No of words: 552.0 408.028673835 135% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16666666667 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367753623188 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282608695652 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210144927536 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152173913043 0.112833075102 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84798684412 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 66.3811793647 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7142857143 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0599910799 48.84282405 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 47.9751552795 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.70860927152 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33241860154 0.300154397459 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0885116708083 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0718580837396 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.448668728941 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119171112715 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110637070406 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768582028957 0.0781384742642 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.418508869736 0.336927656856 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.041671342904 0.067059652881 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22647551298 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408116618469 0.0618886996521 66% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.4623655914 366% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 25.0 13.6433691756 183% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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