Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should choose a job that is similar to what their parents did.
Since the dawn of the civilization human being were looking for a proper job, hence a noteworthy and well-paid job can play a vital role in the future life of the individuals, likewise it will guarantee a jubilant life in the future,it is worth nothing that finding a job in this challenging era is pretty tough.one of the contentious questions which is often raised regarding this issue is whether children should continue a similar job to their parents and ancestors or they have to choose a different career. Some people are inclined toward the view that continuing a existed job may seem mundane whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. From my vantage point choosing a career similar to parents is not a proper decision. The following reasons will aptly elaborate on my perspective.
The first exquisite reason is that people should be free in following their point of view and interests. It's a fact that parents should guide their children in different aspects of their career as well as future job, nevertheless any pressure on opting future profession will lead to mundaneness, in other words although it seems commendable to get a straight forward job but having a job regardless to inherent interest will undoubtedly result in boreness and monotonousness in future.
Every individual are good at a particular work, hence limiting a person to a distinct job contributes to failing in that career, To put it in another way having a predefined job is suppression of one's natural talents. A relevant study which was conveyed in Europe showed that most of the people who had continued their parent's job are not satisfied their job and quit it after a while, despite the high income, plus that most of them are not as creative and self-confident as they were in the. Likewise, if parents don't have a proliferate business the chance of children's success is much feeble.
Earth is changing rapidly and this change will intense the needs for different jobs, maybe some jobs needs to be altered with a modern job with more new instruments because they are outdated. Take a spinning company as an example, in the past people use to made cloth by simple machines in their house and maybe their children helped them and this was their craft, but with advances in technology cloth has been provided by big manufacturers, so there is no need to those obsolete ways of producing goods, indeed the need of this new manufactores is cultivated engineers and workers who can cope with this type of difficulties.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that due to different needs of society and various interests of people which varies from one to another people should choose not their parents job necessarily, unless people have an alternative, continuing parents job doesn't seem logical, also according to the facts the chance of success is much lower than having an independent job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, likewise, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, in short, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9593495935 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79629002207 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532520325203 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 148.788697114 48.9658058833 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.333333333 100.406767564 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.6045352989 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 5.45110844103 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279502038291 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108470378703 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495908246653 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168338808646 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337294927338 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 11.7677419355 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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