Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Nowadays, there are many zoos have been placed in my country. However, some people think that a zoo has no useful purpose. I, on the other hand, disagree with those people because it can educate young children, it makes people feel relaxed and it provides a habitat for animals.
Firstly, zoos can make children study better about the animals. As you know, many students have to study everything through their books or their teachers, so that they have to imagine about those animals and they may be confused at some information relate to animals that they read in the books. On the contrary, some schools let their students go to the zoo to study; they can see, feed and touch some animals. Therefore, they may learn more effectively by the active way.
Secondly, people can relax when they come to the zoo. After a week, people may get many stresses from their work or their study. The zoo can be the best way to they to reduce their stress. As a result, at there, it is really beautiful; they not only can meet many great landscapes but also feed and touch many animals
Finally, zoos may be a good habitat for many species. Some people think that we should let the animal go back to their original habitat. However, today, there are more and more people want to catch or kill animal illegal. Thus, if people keep the animal in the zoo, there may be better for the animal. At some zoo, they may have a great environment, some Veterinarians to make sure that the animal always healthy and zookeeper.
In conclusion, I hope that people will build more and more large zoos that have the best environment for many animals to stay and they will let their children go to the zoo in order to make they learn better and reduce their stress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... to the zoo in order to make they learn better and reduce their stress.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'you know', 'as a result', 'on the contrary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197183098592 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.154929577465 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0845070422535 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0535211267606 0.046263068375 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0816901408451 0.0685040099705 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0901408450704 0.118717715034 76% => OK
Participles: 0.00845070422535 0.0351676179071 24% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.20192473865 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0394366197183 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0901408450704 0.0887237588012 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0422535211268 0.0209618222197 202% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0056338028169 0.0139019557991 41% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1739.0 2387.08602151 73% => OK
No of words: 314.0 408.028673835 77% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53821656051 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.267515923567 0.338922669872 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171974522293 0.251872472559 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.117834394904 0.174417080927 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0509554140127 0.112833075102 45% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.20192473865 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477707006369 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 47.5615319414 59.2087087015 80% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 19.625 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6070465633 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6875 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1875 0.644075263715 184% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 36.8224522293 45.7405998639 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.01941747573 1.45489161554 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192763924154 0.300154397459 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11876165743 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0864825036456 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530834463964 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183279349875 0.151897553556 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859223520729 0.114077575197 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536702845353 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328074191714 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.114953280405 0.067059652881 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130883661546 0.210909579961 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0083437989329 0.0618886996521 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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