Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Universities and colleges are the places where students spend most of their time in. Even though by facilitating classes and libraries with most up-to-date technologies and materials student could learn better and improve their knowledge, I believe sports and social activities play an important role in their accomplishments.
Education is key factor to success but when students are healthier, they will obtain much better results because exercise makes them think faster and better. For example, in my university years, one friend of mine was fat so she was always ill and her doctor told her that you must lose weight or your health situation will become worse. Hence, she was not able to concentrate on her study and as a consequence, her exam results were really disappointing.
As an established fact, by exercising regularly, students are happier than even before. For instance, when I was at my second year of university, I got involve in exercise program for our university so that I found many new friends and spend my spare time with some of them. Accordingly, I could learn plenty of things from them and it enabled me to look the life from another perspective. Thus, I was really happier than before. I told myself that I wish I had become familiar with these programs sooner.
A widely view is that social activities give students a sense of having great motivation. If students only focus on their studies, they might become depressed and gain results that they have not expected. With social activities students devote their time to many things and can make good connections with new people. As a result, they will learn from their experience. Thereby, it is less expected that students will be depressed.
All things considered, sport and social activities make students think more positive and become familiar with new things in their life that have positive effects on their future life and careers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ogies and materials student could learn better and improve their knowledge, I believe ...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: ESTABLISHED_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'a fact'.
Suggestion: a fact
... results were really disappointing. As an established fact, by exercising regularly, students are ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('widely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('view') instead of another adjective.
...e familiar with these programs sooner. A widely view is that social activities give students...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, if, look, really, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03761755486 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70027716029 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570532915361 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7802608456 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120328401074 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375228027202 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047436141683 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738923710147 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403170486548 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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