Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
"Education is an inevitable part of everyone life" said Bernard Russell, one of the brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt that education is one of the hectic phenomena in every modern society, affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question, however, is that whether to agree or disagree has sparked spirited debate among people recently. I am, to a huge extent, disagree with this standpoint. In the ensuing paragraph, I will try to shed some light on my perspective through ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite reason to be mentioned is that it is crystal clear that students spend most of their time at school. they are trying to learn various types of science in addition when they come back to the home they have to do their assignments, thus it is really good for them to expend some time at online games or social network in order to change their mood. For instance, children in the past do not have any facilities to enjoy also they have to study all the time without any enjoyable activities, so most of them could not continue their studying in order to achieve to the high degree due they tired of doing routine tasks all the time.
Another point which deserves some words here is that by these advances, they can improve their social skills which is the crucial point for them because if they want to be the successful person, they have to know how to attract people till enhance their business. As an example, one of my friends avoided using all these devices during the time when she studied at the university to graduate at the accurate time though when she started her own business she could not improve it thanks to the weakness of her in making communication with others.
Although the a fore-mentioned reasons are the first ones that cross the mind at the first glance but they are by no mean that the only one. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be born in our mind. It should be noted that nobody can deny that cell phone, online games and social networks reduce physical activities among children also increase numbers of the disease like obesity, diabetic and blood pressure. Nonetheless if parents can make a logical schedule for their children, they can overcome these issues moreover encourage their children to use these applications in a normal way, hence using these technologies need a little observation.
To make a long story short, from all the above mentioned points and reason, one we can safely draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of the above statements soon we can realize that not only these kinds of technology help children to improve themselves but also have good effect on the process of their studying. That is why I firmly disagree with this argument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, really, so, thus, for instance, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2324.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8115942029 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53884768137 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0215266112 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.25 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1875 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190459010996 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593302456887 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377833704196 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097149124043 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041275513642 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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