Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting that from your peers.
To begin with, the experience is the most important as well as precious elements of people's lives. In fact, older people have a lot of practical and effective experience than those who have the same age. It is possible that they experienced the same situations which enable us to use better advice. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. When I was an undergraduate student, I had decided to apply for university abroad. I did not have any information about applying and which university is better, my friends did not know too. Subsequently, a friend of mine applied for the USA universities two years ago. Then, I had a skype with them and he explained all important things in detail. For this reason, had I not consulted with my older friends, I would not have enhanced my knowledge and information about university abroad. As a result, I strongly believe that getting advice from older people is much more worth.
Second, time is really important for the young. If they make a wrong decision, they will definitely lose many opportunities in their lives. Hence, they should not take the risk of getting advice from their peers because they are not mature enough in order to make a great and important decision. For example, when I was an undergraduate student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I interviewed the professor Nejati, who is a well-known psychologist in my country, about the effect of getting advice from older friends on individuals' lives. He told me that based on my experience and researches, a high percentage of students using their older advice will be successful because they reach their goals easily by knowing all positive and negative aspects of each advice which is evaluated by older friends. Accordingly, the more people get advice from their older friends, the more they will be prosperous by saving their time
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, if, really, second, so, then, well, for example, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91384615385 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80330151933 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532307692308 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3026824493 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9411764706 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191907341577 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630079150602 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773203897323 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150856073098 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184721233608 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.