Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should make it possible for children to attend preschool (early childhood education programs, for example, for three-year-old children) at no costs for children’s families.
Use reasons and examples to support your position.
When asked about whether government should provide gratis preschool for children or not, different people have different answers. There might be some people who believe that government should facilitate for children to attend preschool. However some people have a negative attitude on this issue which point out that there is several disadvantages that children can attend free preschool. Although there is much controversy about this topic and without any doubt if government establish free preschool , there is chance for poor families whose children educate in such class. I strongly feel that state should not do free education for preschool children. From this perspective, My opinion is based on financial, personal.
First, in my financial view, providing free class for children causes extra costs to impose government. For doing this, a lot of teachers and trained forces must employ and this means that it require a lot of money and time to fulfill this goal. So i think state can better work rather than this expenses and for instance this costs can spend for medical treatment. For example , in my country thousands of people die owing to the fact that they don’t have enough money to expend for their illness.
from a personal perspective, i think that this educations cannot help to child to growth and only due to parent's mentality children sign up in these education. For instance, in my family we have two children that one of them went to preschool and another do not. in the next year, when they had finished first class, the child going to preschool take a less grade. So because of it I think that attending preschool do not have any education advantage. So spending money for thing that is not useful is preposterous.
It is undeniable that sometimes and in specific situation free preschool can help some families for different reason. However, everything has its two sides. When I compare the advantages and disadvantages of this idea, the advantages will be limited into a low level. All the factors above determined me to conclude that government should not pay any cost for preschool.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239074550129 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.161953727506 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0848329048843 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0411311053985 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0411311053985 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133676092545 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.025706940874 0.0351676179071 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66333550602 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282776349614 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00514138817481 0.00188951952338 272% => OK
Determiners: 0.0796915167095 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0308483290488 0.0209618222197 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0179948586118 0.0139019557991 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2129.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 353.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03116147309 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351274787535 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266288951841 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206798866856 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1388101983 0.112833075102 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66333550602 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546742209632 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 59.8855315936 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5789473684 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9319084384 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.052631579 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.644075263715 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.54480286738 343% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.2078425526 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.63157894737 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335426751656 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103622423662 0.103427244359 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0781241442701 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472495550321 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1115010646 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128862500546 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732487517346 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311677412494 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0390421259584 0.067059652881 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231993147197 0.210909579961 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360215837489 0.0618886996521 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.