Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should make it possible for children to attend preschool (early childhood education programs, for example, for three-year-old children) at no costs for children’s families.
When asked about whether government should provide gratis preschool for children or not, different people have different answers. There might be some people who believe that government should facilitate an education of preschool children. However some people have a negative attitude on this issue which points out that there are several disadvantages that children can attend free preschool. Although there is much controversy about this topic and without any doubt if government establish free preschool, there is chance for poor families whose children be educated in such class. I strongly feel that state should not present free education to preschool children. From this perspective, my opinion is based on financial, personal and social experiences.
First, in my financial view, providing free class for children causes extra costs imposed on government. For doing this, a lot of teachers and trained forces must be employed and this means that it require a lot of money and time to fulfill this goal. So I think state can do a better work rather than these expenses and for instance these costs can be spent on medical treatment. For example, in my country thousands of people die owing to the fact that they do not have enough money to expend for their illness.
From a personal perspective, I think that these educations cannot help the child to grow and only due to parent's mentality children sign up in these educations. For instance, in my family we have two children that one of them went to preschool and another do not went. In the next year, when they had finished first class, the child going to preschool take a less grade. So because of it I think that attending preschool do not have any educational advantage. So spending money on thing that is not useful is preposterous.
Finally, in my social view, when children go to preschool, their parents must take children to specific place. This situation makes streets busier and cause traffic problem. Inasmuch as preschool children cannot arrive at their home with taxi or bus school, this problem brings about a lot of care which only one person sit at inside it increase and also air pollution endangers many people in society.
It is undeniable that sometimes and in specific situation free preschool can help some families for different reasons. However, everything has its two sides. When I compare the advantages and disadvantages of this idea, the advantages will be limited into a low level. All the factors above determined me to conclude that government should not pay any cost for preschool.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246808510638 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.155319148936 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851063829787 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0446808510638 0.046263068375 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0489361702128 0.0685040099705 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129787234043 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.031914893617 0.0351676179071 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65060285135 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234042553191 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00425531914894 0.00188951952338 225% => OK
Determiners: 0.0787234042553 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0297872340426 0.0209618222197 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191489361702 0.0139019557991 138% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2572.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 428.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00934579439 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359813084112 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273364485981 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214953271028 0.174417080927 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128504672897 0.112833075102 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65060285135 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.274784256 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4545454545 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5330446952 48.84282405 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.909090909 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 46.7909940527 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.64102564103 1.45489161554 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285407812615 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0746530781623 0.103427244359 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0628417474954 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46213683375 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114864508498 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989320471534 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635319386329 0.0781384742642 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241472099331 0.336927656856 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0793231473865 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18306310962 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298187279783 0.0618886996521 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.