Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
"Young people are the inevitable part of every society" said Bernard Russell, one of the brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt that being an autonomous person is one of the hectic phenomena in every modern society, affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question, however, is that whether to agree or disagree has sparked spirited debate among people recently. I am, to a huge extent, agree with this standpoint. In the ensuing paragraph, I will try to shed dome lights on my perspective through some ample examples and conspicuous reasons. The exquisite to be mentioned is that it is crystal clear that by the advent of technology, we can make a decision easily, due to it just need to search about your subject in the internet additionally be aware about advantageous and disadvantageous of your decision, thus decided to do or not. As an example, I want to point out to my own experience, when I wanted to buy my house, I had several doubts about area that I wanted to live, therefore I started to search on the internet and find information about various areas of Tehran, and finally I could find a suitable place for living.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that most of the young people are educated these days, most of them after age 18 decided to live alone in order to gain experience and make their personality more autonomous. As clarification we can see that most of the teenagers when face to the problem instead of nagging, make effort to find the best strategy to overcome their issues also, most of the graduated people are look for job to earn money and make a good condition for their lives freely, try to enhance their position in society without paying attention and consulting with their parent, they are just follow their dreams, in contrast young people in past always continue their parents job and always depended on them, hence they never could be achieve to whatever they wanted thanks to they never try to take a risk in their lives.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at the first glance, but they are no mean that the only ones. Actually there is another subtle point which must be born in our mind. It should be also noted that teachers and professors try to guide young people to choose their way based on their interest and talent. As an illustration most of the young people do not like to explain their ideas to other people or convince them about their lifestyle, in fact, all of them believe that they live once, therefore this is absolutely logical that live how they want beside that try the fluctuation of life and make themselves stronger.
To make a long story short, from all the above mentioned points and reasons, one we can safety draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of above statements soon we can realize that young people are affordable to make their own lives. That is why I firmly agree with this argument.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as to, in contrast, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2479.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73996175908 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5628063405 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521988527725 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.186200299 48.9658058833 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.266666667 100.406767564 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8666666667 20.6045352989 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37254249583 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102028893217 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786855715291 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219510240474 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528163856271 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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