Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people today believe that working quickly is vital even if it could cause mistakes. Avoiding mistakes while doing your job has the same importance of delivering it on the right time. I do not agree with that opinion for the following reasons I am going to mention in in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the main goal of any required work is to finish it on the most appropriate and successful way. The accuracy and the quality are essential, however, that does not mean to the neglect the importance of getting your mission as fast as you can. Having said that, we have to take into consideration that the balance between the quality of the final product and the time to accomplish it. A research that has been published by Cairo university indicated that any profitable project or company must be based on two pillars, the quality of the final service or product and efficiency in the quick production. For example, I used to buy some computer accessories form an online website that sells very elegant unique products, but they had only one drawback which is the late delivery. They never respect the due time and as a result, I stopped dealing with them, and so did a lot of people. The bad reputation has lead finally to the collapse of this company, despite the good quality of their goods.
It goes without saying that the quality of the product is as important as the quick production. The value of anything you buy rests in primary in its level and quality. If the customers are not satisfied about your work, service or product, they definitely will not deal with you or use your services again. That explains why some people are willing to pay a lot amount of money to buy some famous brands that because they have confidence in the quality of that brand. For example, Although some types of notebooks computers are very expensive than others, people don’t hesitate to buy them because they are sure that this computers are durable and trustworthy.
In conclusion, It is inevitable that any successful company must take into account these two factors, the quality and quickness when working on any new product or serving. Neglecting any of them will have severe consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... to buy them because they are sure that this computers are durable and trustworthy. ...
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... of them will have severe consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78590078329 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56504792417 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553524804178 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5040466638 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.823529412 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165913352675 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548793280234 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051494817546 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115868194495 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783627573878 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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