Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
people benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Traveling is a fundamental factor in building a human knowledge about other places and people. Furthermore, traveling helps in understanding cultures and customs of other countries. In addition, there are a lot of fun, fancy places, great restaurants and amazing museums. So traveling has spiritual and entertaining influence as well. Some people think it would be more benefit to travel to foreign countries than traveling in our own countries, but personally, I think it would be better to travel inside my country, I think it is a great experience that gives us the opportunity to learn more about our valuable places.
Primarily, traveling inside their countries would be more convenient, comfortable and cost-effective. As people fell comfortable, they can enjoy more and learn more. It is more convenient because the travelers do not need to get a visa to another country. Also, quite often they travel by cars, so they do not have to pay tons of money for flights. Besides, the huge time they already waste in long traveling. Especially, in a country like the United States, it has a lot of attractions and places worth visiting. There are a lot of documentary movies talking about a tremendous amount of places that everyone can visit and enjoy, they tried to turn people attention toward them because they are not popular but at the same time, visiting them would be so valuable and important.
Secondary, traveling inside their country would solve the most challenging problem in traveling, language difference, if they travel to foreign countries they need interpreter or guide, in turn, that would cost extra money and make the trip less comfortable, loss of privacy and kind of dangerous. A recent TV show which represented a real story, talking about how a tour guide kidnapped two of the tourists and he wants million dollars to let them go back to the United States.
Admittedly, sometimes it would be fun to visit another country, learning about other people, cultures, customs and taking a look at how other people live as well. Also, try new food, places and learning about the history of these counties. In turn, that would widen people mind and make them wiser and open-minded.
To make the long story short, traveling inside is so important, before trying to explore other countries they have to explore their own countries. Definitely, there are great more things they do not know about their countries. In addition, that would help their countries financially because they spend their money inside instead of spending them in another country. So there trip would have personal and public benefits at the same time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, second, so, well, i think, in addition, kind of, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03652968037 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73398942798 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493150684932 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2209384152 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.047619048 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250108437707 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827012901733 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709688800553 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150685134945 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780642714863 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.