Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment, doing things they like to do, rather than doing things they should do.
Since the beginning of this century, in the distinctive civilized societies, it has been a controversial argument among individuals, through which numerous conflicts have been engendered. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that nowadays people spend too much time on having fun rather than doing imperative tasks, while others consider this issue in a completely diverse perspective. Although an absolute conclusion cannot be made, in spite of all opposite attitudes, I strongly concur with the statement that individuals dedicate less time to being entertained or having personal enjoyment. The outstanding reasons for my opinion would be explored as follows.
First and foremost, I speculate that the rate of unemployment is increasing, so people stick to the first opportunity they see as a career. I realize that some people would disagree with me; however, in my vantage point, most of the people we daily see are working in careers that not only do not they enjoy but also they have to spend their time on getting better at them to get promotions. In fact, most of the people do not take the risk of abandoning their current job in order to pursue their dreams. Not being involved in their dream jobs, individuals spend most of their time on doing the tasks that they should do.
In addition to being employed in exhausting jobs, people have to live at exceedingly increasing prices such as, price of renting a house, buying a car, or even having fun. As a case in point, having fun today would cost one a lot. To illustrate, if one wishes to travel overseas, he/she would have to pay for too many things such as tickets, or booking a room in a nice hotel. Therefore, one should work so hard and cast some money aside in order to be able to afford the trip. Moreover, in this crazy world, people have the propensity to get more competitive. As a matter of fact, most of them would like to spend their money on purchasing some luxurious furniture, bigger houses, and faster cars rather than having fun.
Apart from the point that I made above, there is also another reason that deserves some words here, it is about the increasing rate of depression among individuals. In my perspective, if individuals spend too much time on having fun; then how come the rate of depression is increasing? In fact, I personally love my job, but before getting this job, I had to work as a waitress during my college days. Indeed, I was so depressed and angry those days. Moreover, I would have to both work and study, so that did not appear to me as an entertainment. I know lots of people who are in the same situation that I was.
By way of conclusion, on the grounds of aforementioned arguments, I believe that people spend less time on their personal enjoyment rather than essential tasks.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206581352834 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.17550274223 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0712979890311 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0639853747715 0.046263068375 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0621572212066 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146252285192 0.118717715034 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0603290676417 0.0351676179071 172% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70355963563 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0310786106033 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0822669104205 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0164533820841 0.0209618222197 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0091407678245 0.0139019557991 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2801.0 2387.08602151 117% => OK
No of words: 486.0 408.028673835 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7633744856 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308641975309 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205761316872 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16049382716 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11316872428 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70355963563 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 61.309015822 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1428571429 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.318705477 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.380952381 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 43.7189888301 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.3696969697 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271551587249 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115861730403 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0832904873629 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510406149327 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163569598256 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899976747389 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678330051854 0.0781384742642 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.289525477029 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0740957479303 0.067059652881 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166274079419 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056945170018 0.0618886996521 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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