Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Subjects such as art, music and drama should be a part of every child's basic education.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Subjects such as art,music and drama should be part of every child's basic education as these subjects play an inevitable role in shaping a child's mind and in expressing their emotion in different ways. Therefore, I agree with the given statement.
Art, music and drama help the child's mind to develop better and faster because different acts have an astounding effect on mind and it's development. These types of subjects develop child's imagination power. The creation of art in any method from drawing and painting to poetry writing and even dancing assists the learners at any stage to gain self-confidence. It helps in shaping the child's abilities in communication and group-working. For example when child participates in any play or drama he/she needs to learn how to work in groups. Art, music and drama also represent different cultures. Each country has it's own art forms. For example children can learn about different country, their art forms, their people through music and drama. Art, music and drama can also provide fun and enjoyment to children. If a child develop interest in any of these subjects he/she can make career in art, music and drama in future.
However, children who are less interested in art, music, drama find it boring and waste of time. Compared to other subjects music, drama required more establishment. For example music learning requires different music instruments which are very costly. Without art education children do not develop any extra skills.
In conclusion, art, music and drama should be part of every child's education for child's complete growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65305450846 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542307692308 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.044711742 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8235294118 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31837350669 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114144499141 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710964989257 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244275596371 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068860913228 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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