Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days some individuals are becoming more and more important for the society like teachers, since these are the teacher that train the future members of the society. Some people believe that teacher have more respect in the past. Others, however, argue that nothing has changed and teacher are still appreciated and valued by the society.I definitly agree that in the past teacher were more respectful and also had grater valued by society.
First, money become an importane factor in people relation ship, hence values change very much from the past and people have more appreciation for the member of the society who earn more money rather than having positive influence for the society. For example, when I was child I had a elementery teacher every morning my friends and I Lived our home and gather in front of his home and wait until he get ready and come with us to the school. During the way some student who want to distingush theimselves from other student asked about the homework and the way they solved those problem and ask the teacher's opinion about their precedure. However, the teacher reaction was interesting he always answered with a smile and told them " I will tell you in the class", yet my friends and I paly soccer in the way to school and try to engage the teacher in our game and he also accept our request and play with us. So those days belt lots of good memory in my mind. Nevertheless, as I was studying for the TOEFL exam I attended some classes which was just related to English and I just go to the class learn something grammar point and went out. As this example clarifies teacher-student relation ship change very much. In past student have emotional relation with their teacher which cause appreciation. At the same time, today student-teacher change very much. In fact student pay some money and buy their knowledge and they have no emotional connection with their teacher. Thus they are less likely to have value to ther teacher.
Second, these days their are lots of E-learning program which take the plce of teachers. THerefore students spend less time with their teacher. For instance, for my Bachlor project I have to do some researchn which was related to Neural-Network. Although I have to consult with my professor about this issue, I did my self and bought some courses online and take help from those course to complete my project. as the aformentioned example illustrated new aspect of modern technology like E-learnig reduce students need to their teachers. Consequently, students are less likely to have value to their teacher, as they found no need to their teacher any more.
In sum, although some individuale believe that teacher are still valued by their student and nothing has not change from the past, I belive teachers are less valued by their students. In my opinion, not only should teacher like pass do their job and teach student, but they also have to attend some volentery activity with their student that would improve their relation ship with their students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...l appreciated and valued by the society.I definitly agree that in the past teache...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ty. For example, when I was child I had a elementery teacher every morning my fri...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... in front of his home and wait until he get ready and come with us to the school. D...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
...ut the homework and the way they solved those problem and ask the teachers opinion about thei...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...y they solved those problem and ask the teachers opinion about their precedure. However,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eresting he always answered with a smile and told them ' I will tell you in ...
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Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'accepts'.
Suggestion: accepts
...age the teacher in our game and he also accept our request and play with us. So those ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n something grammar point and went out. As this example clarifies teacher-student ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...motional connection with their teacher. Thus they are less likely to have value to t...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... to ther teacher. Second, these days their are lots of E-learning program which ta...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: THerefore,
...rogram which take the plce of teachers. THerefore students spend less time with their tea...
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Suggestion: As
...om those course to complete my project. as the aformentioned example illustrated n...
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Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...om those course to complete my project. as the aformentioned example illustrated n...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...ed by their student and nothing has not change from the past, I belive teachers are le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2529.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 521.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85412667946 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47875281174 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483685220729 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5407590439 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.954545455 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6818181818 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86363636364 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209647008899 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726194607442 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539516739493 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146340100961 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545496293454 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.