Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers play a significant role in different aspects of our life. we have learned numerous things such as scienticit topics as well as positive behavioral issues from them. Some people believes that their role were more valued by society. However, some others are of the opinion that they are appreciated as same as the past. Although no one could deny their impact on our personality, I strongly believes that they are less appricated by socitey and other people for following reasons.
Firstly, people are become more independent rather than the past especially in their learning proccess. They can access numerous resources for reading such as books, magazine or articles. besides, using the internet let the people to capable to use online courses which are mainly free. therefore, they feel that they do not need their teachers.On contrary, in the past students relied more on their teachers becuase they did not access any other sources. Take one of my friend's exprience as an example.during his last semester, he had a schedule conflicting that could not to attend his electronics class. his professor should not required to attend his classes. so, he decided to study himself. As a result, it can be easily seen that he did not feel any thing respectfull to his teacher.
Furthermore, another reson related to that there are huge differences between teachers and students from their age gap and their desires to their point of view towards the world. These differences cause some controversial problems for them. therefore, it led to be seem that teachers are less respected. For instance, my father as one of my teacher in high school is a perfect example that shows that even if we are more familiar each other, these intentionally differences wheather are good or not, cause some problem as same as I have these problems with my father and sometimes others tell me that I am a little rude and I am so sad for this problem.
To sum up, with regards to the reason mentioned above, we could draw that, although the role of teachers are undeiable, they are less appriciated in copmarison to the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91061452514 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67570939046 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4430620222 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159846539797 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485815648388 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515060304717 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10124306251 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303493919574 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.