Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that the ability to make many friendships easily is more important for happiness than the ability to maintain friendships with small number of people over a long period of time, some people may agree withy this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disarees with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponents may have the right to believe in that. I believe that the ability to make new friendship easily makes the life very interesting because there are so many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that finding a job today is very hard. So, the people today need to change their countries looking for some good job opportunities. So, the ability to make new friendship easily will help the person to be more flexible and more able to adapt the new life. However, the person whom lack such ability will suffer a lot and may feel lonely, when he forces to change his place.
Another point why I advocate that the ability to make new friendships easily is very important is the rapid development of the technology which makes the world looks like small country. Today we are living in the era of advance technology and that increase the connection between the people whom live in different countries. So, the ability to make new friendships will increase the person ability to learn more about other cultures and increase his knowledge and skills.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the competition between people for a job is very high and people need to build nice relationships because such ability consider single greatest determinants of the person succeed in the jobs. Additionally, the friendly person has great impacts in his team and by that he will left good impression in his boss mind. So, the friendly behavior has both social and emotion impact on the person life. On the other hand, the person which avoid making new friendships will look like annoying person and by that he will lose a lot of chances.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion which says that, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...with small number of people over a long period of time, some people may agree withy this idea ...
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Line 4, column 407, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: changing
...lot and may feel lonely, when he forces to change his place. Another point why I advoc...
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Line 8, column 321, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...impacts in his team and by that he will left good impression in his boss mind. So, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80871670702 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53750023086 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47215496368 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5163975712 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.125 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8125 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31336151854 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102289765664 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127132716805 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166497444223 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125862599227 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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