Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Humans are social beings in nature, and throughout life's long and tortuous journey, we meet and establish relationships with manifold people in the societ we are living in. It is fair to say that communities are essential parts of each society which play a vital role in terms of connecting people together. In this regard, some people hold the position that nowadays, young people do not spare enough time to helping their communities. As far as I'm concerned, the statement is true, for the following reasons.
The first reason that immediately comes to mind is that most young people are tremendously busy nowadays, to the extent that all that os on their mind is themselves and their future. Their minds are obsessed with myriads of concerns and thaughts about how they can improve their lives, advance in their careers and find prosperity. Therefore, there will remain no time for them to spare other activities such as helping their communities. If they could manage to overcome today life's challenges and difficulties, they have done something quite significant, let alone coming up with ways to help others in their communities. In most societies, when reaching the age 18, young people must leave their families and step into the adult life. As we all know, the world's population is increasing at a dramatically rapid pace. As a result, a fierce competition over decent paying job opportunities has broke out all over the world. The job positions are noticably limited, and so the battle for acquairing them is becoming more and more intense. In such circumstances, it is no surprise if young people do not give time to helping their communities. They must put their best on the line, ascertaining that they will do whatever in their power to survive this battle and end up victorious. Taking this into account, young people nowadays spend most of their time and energy on coming up with ways to become a successful person. They study hard, day and night, to graduate with high grades, making sure that they will find a proper job position upon graduation. Also, those who are already engaged in a work will work hard with full effort, focus, commitment and determination so that they could advance and gain higher incomes. As you can see, today world's challenging situation require young people to allocate most of their times th their own life, so they do not give time to helping their communities.
Another significant factor regarding this issue is that young people have become less social and caring in recent years. As stated in previous paragraph, most young people have to either study or work 24/7 to guarantee a bright future. This virtually saps all their energy, and haunts their minds. They become less caring regarding other people because the only thing that exist in their misnds is their own survival. Their interaction with other people and even their friends become more and more leimited. When people do not spend time together, they will gradually become distanced from each other. This is the case regarding young people. Thy're always studying or working, so they will not have the time to spare staying, communicating and making relations with other people and their commiunities. As a result, they become less and less attentive to them, leading to not giving time to helping them.
In sum, it is one of today world's situation consequenses that (young people do not spend time to helping their communities. Not only are young people tremendously busy with their works and studies nowadays, they have also became less caring about their communities.)
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...ks and studies nowadays, they have also became less caring about their communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2993.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 600.0 407.700716846 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98833333333 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94923200384 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59366696654 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468333333333 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 904.5 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3041144827 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.206896552 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6896551724 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1724137931 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322858184296 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104715723511 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923823752005 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23655909535 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035983731026 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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