Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is more and more development with the revolution of industrial and globalization. There are varieties of things for people to explore and experience. As a result, everybody enjoy life and want to live full each day of their life. The question is young people and older people, who more enjoy life? In my opinion, I believe that older people, they like life more than the young.
Young people keep in mind that they still have a lot of time. As a result, they can use their time on whatever they want. Therefore, these time sometimes become futile. There is the fact that young people spend much time on entertainment and relax, it is a way to waste their life. Meanwhile, older people, they understand that they do not have much time anymore. Older people, they take their time to do useful thing such as caring their family and charity or do social work. More importantly, they feel that their life is worth to living.
Additionally, I want to talk about view of people with life. Young people, who have a few experiences with life, they trend have negative view in every issue. But on other hand, older people have more positive view in these issues. Besides that, it is often said that older people have insure thinking more than the young. Facing with a problem, they trend to deal with it than give up, so they have more ability to solve issue than young people. As a result, when issue is not resolved, young people also have negative feel, it make they see life more boring. For example, when ailment comes, some people will feel terrible, even give up, some people in contrast will willing to face with disease and fighting with it. However, question is who is people will have truly opinion. The fact shows that they are older people, who have undergone a lot of difficulties and mistakes. Of course, positive view make people like life more.
Some people can say that older people, they have more risk of ailments, so they would not kind on life anymore. In contrast, when people undergo more and more difficulty, especially sickness, they will enjoy life which they have fought to keep. Some people can say that young people, they have enthusiasm of youth and they have motivation to conquer every problem. Nevertheless, more ambitiousness young people have, more hopeless they have when their effort is not received good result.
In conclusion, I want to repeat older people 's view on value of life. They respect every second of their life because they know how time is valuable and important. It is not all young people dislike life, but difficulties of social make them scare and even give up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31843699687 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424836601307 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Interrogative: 6.0 0.994623655914 603% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1718449092 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.4827586207 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8275862069 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10344827586 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282849524543 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114913854175 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612005161 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20104377546 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620197973142 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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