Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the contemporary world, a lot of things have been changed. For instance, communication and people behavior have been changed a lot due to the fact that new difficulties have arisen and now people cannot participate in close connections to help communities as before. Although some people believe that youngsters dedicate enough time to help their community, others refute this by giving some reasons. In my belief, people have limited time in helping each other because of some reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, today’s economic problems made almost all of the young people to be overwhelmed by their problems to make a proper living. In order to afford expenses of living, people, preferable, young people, have to work hard for more than eight hours a day. By this way at the end of the day, people are tired of working hard and just try to have enough rest and spend a little time with other family members until the next day begins. Consequently, constraint in time, makes no time for almost anyone who wants to participate in helping their community. For instance, one of my friends who is studying in a university, is a person that is limited in budget and has to work along with his studying to afford university fees. As a result, nearly no time is remained for him to participate in social activities and help other members of it. There are several examples of these kinds of people who have to dedicate their time to work hard to continue life.
Second, communications have changed our way of contacting with each other completely. Nowadays, young people use computers to send emails and also smartphones to participate in social groups to communicate with each other from distance. Also, students in universities sometimes use these methods to solve their problems with their supervisor and also hold virtual courses by video calling from any location in the world. These kinds of communication, made an immense distance between people, especially the young ones who are somewhat expert at using these technologies. Thus, people trends have been changed and they seldom tend to be close to each other rather than past that people could create strong bonds with each other to solve their problems in close relations. Consequently, dedicating time by young people to be in touch and help other members of the community, especially older ones, is almost difficult and cannot be realized.
All in all, in light of the aforementioned reasons, diversity in today’s problems that young people encounter and also the ways of new communications, made people in constraint to help others in a community. We hope that in the future, new technology could help people to be more in touch instead of being connected from distances and decline their help.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'as to', 'for instance', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236538461538 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.175 0.158761421928 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0826923076923 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0557692307692 0.046263068375 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0307692307692 0.0685040099705 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140384615385 0.118717715034 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0538461538462 0.0351676179071 153% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78337629412 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0480769230769 0.0309702414327 155% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0826923076923 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00769230769231 0.0209618222197 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00961538461538 0.0139019557991 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2782.0 2387.08602151 117% => OK
No of words: 463.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00863930886 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349892008639 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244060475162 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168466522678 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11879049676 0.112833075102 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78337629412 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4686825054 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.7193016348 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3684210526 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.828440958 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.421052632 120.699889404 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3684210526 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.526315789474 0.644075263715 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.7744685688 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.64705882353 1.45489161554 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280442253756 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137521391281 0.103427244359 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0743134432308 0.0752933317313 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539663849898 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135191699974 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12582366191 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527764116323 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.457103738881 0.336927656856 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0461719210454 0.067059652881 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204725462382 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481769590098 0.0618886996521 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.