Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As people live together in a community, everyone has its own responsibility in order to help the community which they live in. One may think that young people do not do this responsibility and do not allocate sufficient time to help their community. While this may be true for some of the young people, generally, I believe that most of them do their responsibility very well. Following are my reasons for holding this point of view.
Firstly, there are many volunteer groups which are held by young people. When a group of people work on a volunteer team they are actually playing an important role for their community and are providing a great contribution to the society. For example, last year a volunteer team in my city was gathering members in order to train children from poor families who did not have opportunity to go to school. They helped so many kids to be educated and literate. kids are the most important part of the community because they are responsible for future of the society. So actually, the young people in that volunteer group spent much time and energy not only for those kids but also for their community.
Secondly, when a person studies he is potentially has a great contribution to his community. teenagers and young people spend most of their time in the schools and universities in order to learn different skills or professions which are useful for their community. For instance, when a 19 years old guy starts his study as a software engineer in an university he spends most of his time learning different programs in order to use them for the better technology in near future. Therefore, as he finishes his study and starts his job as an engineer he starts to use his knowledge to improve the technology and the way his community's people are living. So, he helped his community by spending his time on studying.
Last but not least, most of the young people in a community have children. If young parents can breed their kids in the best way they are truly doing a big favor for their community. Because as I said before, Children play an important role for the society and their community's future. So, if young parents can raise good children it means that they are helping their community in a special way.
Consequently, because of abovementioned reasons as far as I am concerned, not only young people give enough time to helping their community but also they play a key role for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72663551402 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68624839332 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441588785047 0.524837075471 84% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.782669639 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.15 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191882920276 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07512856822 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073336694056 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139813027283 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695330063228 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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