Do you agree or disagree? Internet should be like other services such as roads, and government should provide it to the public with no cost.
In the current modern society and age of technology, internet plays an essential role without any doubt and all governments have to present suitable internet connection in their country. However, should they provide free internet? Responses to this question differ from one person to another according the view that they are holding regarding the economic issues. As far as I am concerned, governments should present free internet to people and further justifications will elaborate my perspective.
Reducing air pollution is the first and the most significant advantages of free internet in a country, and even critics can't raise question on this point. As long as people are encouraged to apply online services to do their works such as buying, they don't need to drive their own cars. So, free internet will result in less cars in street, which means less air pollution and healthier environment. Some scientists indicate that countries in which free internet is available have 18% less environmental issues in comparison to other countries.
Another noteworthy point that should be addressed in this ongoing explanation is that by having free internet in a society people have more opportunity to acquire knowledge and information about different subjects. As you know, many online books and articles are free and almost all people have tendency to obtain the most updated information which is available on a wide range of sites. If people don't have access to free internet many of them don't have desire to pay for internet, which culminates in lower knowledge in a society. Therefore, free internet is a good method to enhance people's knowledge.
Admittedly, free internet will cost money for government, and we shouldn't be unaware of this point. Annually, governments have to assign considerable amount of their budgets for internet if they decide to provide people with free internet. However, I believe government can assign tax money on the companies which are advertising through the internet. Also, these companies are making a lot of money and these tax wouldn't harm their income. So, with this strategy we don't need to be worry about the cost of internet. Moreover, considerable money can be saved too, either through taxes which companies have to pay or through reducing air pollution because government don't need to invest more money on environmental concerns.
To sum up, with showing respect to the people who disapprove the title statement, I claim they are wrong about this issue. I believe that all people and societies have right to use free internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'such as', 'you know', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248908296943 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.181222707424 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102620087336 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393013100437 0.046263068375 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0414847161572 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106986899563 0.118717715034 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0349344978166 0.0351676179071 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76564828712 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0458515283843 0.0309702414327 148% => OK
Particles: 0.00218340611354 0.00188951952338 116% => OK
Determiners: 0.0742358078603 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0174672489083 0.0209618222197 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174672489083 0.0139019557991 126% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2582.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 417.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.19184652278 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383693045564 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299760191847 0.251872472559 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220623501199 0.174417080927 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153477218225 0.112833075102 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76564828712 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498800959233 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 55.2918330931 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.85 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3841187814 48.84282405 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.1 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.85 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 50.8260191847 45.7405998639 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.49166666667 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279931120528 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0966956522875 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0691916793883 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516307482093 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10456485062 0.151897553556 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109198902002 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04522535146 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35606556471 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0636308816324 0.067059652881 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177777828701 0.210909579961 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343662535083 0.0618886996521 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.