Do you agree or disagree? It is better to relax through watching a film and reading a book than doing physical exercises?
From a broad perspective, in the current state of affairs we face, in which modern life presentes new challenges for people, it is not far-fetched to presume that individuals are constantly seeking to take advantages their free moments to feel relaxed. However, which activity has more influential effect on people's sense() has been accounted as a contentious issue. There is a growing segment of people who contend that if individuals watch TV or read a book they will feel more calm rather than excercising. I personally repudiate this idea, and in the ensuin paragraph, the rationale behind this opinion will be further elaborated.
First and foremost, exercise breeds() body relaxed by taking off the mind from tension. There is no denying the fact that so apprehensive becomes people's lives that rarely do they find and opportunity to get rid of those stress. As a matter of fact, having apply various methods, people try to distract their mind from the detrimental issue that poision and fatiuge their thoughts. One of the most effective ways is exercinsing. Indeed, people focus on their body while they do practice causing their body in relaxed position. According to the latest research attributing to Dr. Kevin Rude, a prominent and highly respected professor in the Department of Pshychology at the University of Macquarie,poeple pay approximately 60% less attention to their problems whithin the time that they practice. This probe provides further legitimacy for this idea that excersing is the efficient way to become relaxed.
Another vital point which should be taken into consideration is that exercise is a suitable approach for problem solving. Needless to say that overthinking is one of the principal sources of apprehension. Having encounter particualr obstacle, individuals engage in thinking regarding it continousely. Therefore, if they find a way to solve their problems it means they are able to experience the calmness eventually. Indeed, as a direct result of this fact that people shift their attention from the problematic issues to their body movement throughout exercising, their mind does not pass up the chance to be far away from those negative cases. Undoubtedly, after the practice they will find the solutions that they would not have thought about them. On the contrary, since watching a TV or reading a book are acitivities that require braind envolvement, their mind is still engaged with particualr mental acitivity and do not recieve siffcient rest. That is why the result will not be hopeful.
To warp it up, it is more judicious to say that physical acitivity is the best way too feel relaxed. Indeed, aside from its advatantages for the human health, not only doeas this action make people to think less to their difficulties, but also assist them to find ways to pave their ways of problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, as a matter of fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2380.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1403887689 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86878881988 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568034557235 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8525968941 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0476190476 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918552158527 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279693059159 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459600218937 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538348916212 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216339046122 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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