Do you agree or disagree? Is it better to relax through watching a film and reading a book than doing physical exercises?
There is a wide range of debates whether it is better to relax through watching a film or reading a book or doing exercise. In my opinion, the benefits of doing physical exercise clearly outweigh watching TV or reading books. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, people are able to release their stresses and tensions by doing physical activity. In fact, not only doing some activities like playing football, swimming and so forth provide an opportunity for them to be healthy physically, but also they can recover themselves mentally. In addition, nowadays, there are a lot of mental and physical diseases deriving from sedentary lifestyle. An example will illustrate much better. There was a time that I wanted to prepare myself for entrance exam of universities in my country. Subsequently, I spent hours on watching movies and reading books relating the exam. Finally, after three months studying, my weight increased from 80 kg to 92 kg. For this reason, had I done exercise every day, I would not have suffered from obesity. As result, doing exercise ensures people's health mentally and physically.
Secondly, doing exercise allows people to boost their personal skills by interacting with others. In fact, doing exercise with others enable people to become familiar with a lot of sociable people; therefore, they can spend their time with each other, and release their stress by joking and doing something fun. people doing exercise have better chance to become successful in their lives. For example, when I was an undergraduate student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I interviewed professor Nejati, who is a well-known psychologist in my country, about the effects of doing exercise on students performance. He told me that based on my experience and expertise, a high percentage of students who release their stress and tension by doing physical activities, are the ones who are able to become successful in their lives.
In conclusion, no one can deny the enormous effects of doing exercise to release stress effectively and efficiently. Not only are they able to have healthy lifestyle, but also they can show a high productivity in their works
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06613756614 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80048791575 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5888966745 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301841704265 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100330957949 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105909256017 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205305978696 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121557079938 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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