Do you agree or disagree? It is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice.
To begin with, the experience is the most important and precious thing which cannot be obtained easily. In fact, most people try for a long time until to reach an important experience. Hence, we could readily benefit what other learned in their lives without spending a great deal of time, and consume our time making a great plan to ensure our success. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. There was a time that I decided to apply for university abroad and I did not have enough information to increase my knowledge and information about that university. one useful way was to move that country and live for a short period of time, but my father told me that it is better for me to surf the internet to use the experience of students who experienced the same situation. I did latter way because it was cost-effective and time-saving. For this reason, using others advice enable us to make a better decision without spending a hoard of time.
Secondly, when people have a problem, they cannot concentrate on their issues well. Under this circumstance, using others advice can help them enormously and effectively. In order to prevent a stressful and nervous situation, it is better that people ask others to find a great solution to solve their problem. In addition, nowadays, there are a lot of mental and physical diseases deriving from the stress and tension. For example, when I was an undergraduate student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I interviewed professor Nejati, who is a well-known psychologist in our country, about the effects of students' performance when they have problems. He told me that, a high percentage of students who have a problem, are the ones who become nervous due to lacking any experience to solve their problem. He recommended that to eliminate stressful situation it is beneficial for them to refer an accomplished consuler of their university because they are skillful enough to assist them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... and information about that university. one useful way was to move that country and...
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Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... move that country and live for a short period of time, but my father told me that it is bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92058823529 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86941122205 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3895895966 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199217326435 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663239730757 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603174718448 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156453397476 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00140169908812 0.0645574589148 2% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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