do you agree or disagree: it is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice
In today’s convoluted and competitive world, it becomes a highly charged and a widespread hot topic whether it is better to solve our problems by our own knowledge and experience or ask other for advice. Therefore, some people are the leading of the claim that it is more beneficial for people to ask other to cope with problems. However, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that people should their own information and knowledge to solve their obstacles. There are some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
Apart from independence, another striking reason is that so important has time been that human beings' mind has deeply involved from all over the world. Hence, On the one hand, some people believe that when people want to solve their issues by themselves, most of their time will be taken and they eventually cannot find a suitable solution at an appointed time. On the other hand, others believe that, nowadays people are well-informed and skillful enough to solve their problems, or even, they can use the internet to analysis everything fast in order to save their time to solve their obstacles. I take the former viewpoint with a pinch of salt and claim that the latter viewpoint is much closer to the reality, for I do believe that the more people make their decision by themselves, the more they learn how to manage their time and issue to solve their problems without consuming a great deal of time and energy. As a result, until people solve their problems by themselves, they cannot understand the precious of time.
To wrap it up, considering all aforementioned reasons, on soon realizes that nowadays, people should solve their peoples based on their knowledge and information inasmuch as in the first place they will be independent and become a responsible one, and in the second place they learn how to solve their problem without spending more time by coping with their problems. What make me sure and hopeful is that that in the not too distant future people will make their important decision by themselves based on what they know about their lives, for whereby, they can make an outstanding contribution to their society improve, and as a proverb says "the biggest room in the world, is the room for improvement" I firmly believe that it is prominent for us to help our society's breakthrough.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...blems. What make me sure and hopeful is that that in the not too distant future people wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, may, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, as a result, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70547436241 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471604938272 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.234252665 48.9658058833 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.363636364 100.406767564 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8181818182 20.6045352989 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1818181818 5.45110844103 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212680922015 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105545646997 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746318833786 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180498098749 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940370094068 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 11.7677419355 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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