do you agree or disagree: it is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice
In today’s convoluted and competitive world, it becomes a highly charged and a widespread hot topic whether it is better to solve our problems by our own knowledge and experience or ask other for advice. Therefore, some people are the leading of the claim that it is more beneficial for people to ask other to cope with problems. However, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that people should their own information and knowledge to solve their obstacles. There are some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, if people reach the pinnacles of their lives by themselves, I am certain that they will become independent. To elaborate on, we are taught to be responsible when seeking to find a solution for our problems. Nowadays, we are living in a complex era and people are facing a host of difficulties, their motivation will be boosted by solving their problem by their own knowledge and information, what is better, by becoming an autonomous person, they will not face any huge problem for the rest of their lives, because by having a greater impetus, they will not fear when they face a problem. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. When I was a high-school student, I was allowed by my parents to solve my problem based on my previous experience. Since they were aware of the complexity the future life, they enabled me to face the problems by myself. For this reason, when I entered the university, I was an independent man, and therefore I did not have any difficulty to solve my problems. For this reasons, had they not allowed me to make a decision based on my own ability when facing problems, I would not have become an independent person and faced many problems in my future lives.
Apart from independence, another striking reason is that so important has time been that human beings' mind has deeply involved from all over the world. Hence, on the one hand, some people believe that when people want to solve their issues by themselves, most of their time will be consumed due to lack of experience and they eventually cannot find a suitable solution at an appointed time. On the other hand, others believe that nowadays people are well-informed and skillful enough to solve their problems, or even, they can use the internet to analysis everything fast in order to save their time and solve their obstacles. I take the former viewpoint with a pinch of salt and claim that the latter viewpoint is much closer to the reality, for I do believe that the more people make their decision by themselves, the more they learn how to manage their time and issue to solve their problems without consuming a great deal of time and energy. As a result, until people solve their problems by themselves, they cannot understand the precious of time.
To wrap it up, considering all aforementioned reasons, on soon realizes that nowadays, people should solve their peoples based on their knowledge and information inasmuch as in the first place they will be independent and become a responsible one, and in the second place they learn how to solve their problem without spending more time by coping with their problems. What make me sure and hopeful is that that in the not too distant future people will make their important decision by themselves based on what they know about their lives, for whereby, they can make an outstanding contribution to their society improve, and as a proverb says "the biggest room in the world, is the room for improvement" I firmly believe that it is prominent for us to help our society's breakthrough.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, as a result, to begin with, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 91.0 43.0788530466 211% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3022.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 625.0 407.700716846 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8352 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72780339467 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4224 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 948.6 618.680645161 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.456967234 48.9658058833 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.052631579 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8947368421 20.6045352989 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218142902713 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863406119365 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649623053291 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170753974979 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831601274643 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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