Do you agree or disagree? In the modern world, we should be never be impolite to another person.
Nowadays, with changes which have occurred in the world, most of people have boosted their self-esteem because technologies such as internet, self-phones and tablets assist them to gain much information; hence, they have a conviction that no one has right to disprove their opinion and otherwise these selfish humans prefer to show an impolite behavior. I strongly refute the mentioned disgusting behavior and it should be better for everyone if he acts politely in front of others. The next paragraphs will vastly elucidate my vantage point through two salient reasons:
To begin with, one should not forget that being polite is not related to past, present or future time, but it would account as a personality evaluation. Nobody could overlook this fact that wealth, clothes, beauty or high statues cannot guarantee the success of a person; however, having logical behavior, being kind and tendering pleasant moral can appeal other people. Take my own experience. 2 years ago when I had gone for an interview in an international company, one man was full of stress and he shown a bad behavior with me; however, I tried to be cool and later I understood that it was a scenario for testing applicants' behavior under any condition.
The second reason for my arguments lies the reality that sometime presenting a tranquil behavior can be punished a person who has acted impolitely and surprisingly, there may be formed new friendships. Furthermore, human beings can reinforce their patience through this way. For instance, in my office, one day I talked with my colleague in very bad mood- because I was mad from my boyfriend- but she attempted to make me calm. After one hour, I was regretful but she tried to pretend that all things were ordinary. That event could give me a valuable lesson to practice the patience skill and finally we became the best friends.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn I strongly agree that one of the important factors in achieving prosperity is that people should be able to behave politely in any circumstance because it can make their personality appealing and other people prefer to rely on them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...anges which have occurred in the world, most of people have boosted their self-esteem because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98885793872 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72668515937 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632311977716 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.2953419702 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.25 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193440735946 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705770794314 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599913938235 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124641647202 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332063777519 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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