do you agree or disagree with this statement
students are more influenced by their teacher rather than their their friends.
When it comes to the education, the role of education system and teachers would be so significant. This is a teacher who explores the student's talent and gives them proper opportunity to try hard and become successful in the future. Considering this crucial role, the teachers are highly affected their students even more than their friends. There are three reason to show why I have this preference.
First and foremost, teachers play a role as a model for students; in a way that students try to imitate behavior and personal traits of their teachers. As a result, teachers have very significant impact on student's manner. For example, when I was going to primary school I had a very kind teacher in fourth grade who paid especial attention to our discipline and clearness of our belongings such as book, notebook and etc. Moreover, it was really important for me to be considered as the best student in class. So, I always kept my things neat to absorb her attention to myself.
Another prominent reason is that, teachers especially for younger students are as a symbol of kindness and most of the students like their teacher very much. So, they can highly affect their students. This is an absolute fact that if people like a person, follow him/ her easily and accept his/her talking. For instance, my mother is a primary school teacher and her students like her a lot. I have seen that all students easily accept her speaking even if it would not be correct.
Last but not least, the age of teacher is also another reason of teacher impact's rather than friend's impact. In other words, I believe that children often are influenced by somebody who are older than them and this is happen usually about teachers to be older than students. Regarding the fact that human being often consider older people as a role model, this matter would be acceptable.
To sum up, according to what is discussed earlier, this is so obvious that students are influenced by their teachers rather than their friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ant. This is a teacher who explores the students talent and gives them proper opportunit...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...eachers have very significant impact on students manner. For example, when I was going t...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...f our belongings such as book, notebook and etc. Moreover, it was really important for m...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'happen'.
Suggestion: usually happen
...ody who are older than them and this is happen usually about teachers to be older than student...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...ody who are older than them and this is happen usually about teachers to be older than...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in other words', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222513089005 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.146596858639 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0837696335079 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0759162303665 0.046263068375 164% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0785340314136 0.0685040099705 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11780104712 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0340314136126 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51356871111 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0314136125654 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00261780104712 0.00188951952338 139% => OK
Determiners: 0.0811518324607 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104712041885 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0183246073298 0.0139019557991 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2004.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 346.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79190751445 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364161849711 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260115606936 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184971098266 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0867052023121 0.112833075102 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51356871111 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517341040462 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 54.7347690973 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2222222222 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2760919187 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.644075263715 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 45.2337829159 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.24347826087 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193968812696 0.300154397459 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0965062298278 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0697837871514 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520424245369 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160387835214 0.151897553556 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798549943732 0.114077575197 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102732895937 0.0781384742642 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267530390841 0.336927656856 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0295865680329 0.067059652881 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156548140191 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965591738696 0.0618886996521 156% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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