do you agree or disagree with this statement
there will be fewer cars in use in twenty years
In this ever-changing world we see some technological evolutions every day which have significant effect on our lives. The pace of change are even more than thing that we have time to adjust ourselves. Although thousands cars are produced each years, I believe that in twenty years will be fewer cars in use. There are three main reasons to show why I have this preference.
First and foremost, the pace of population grows are so high and hundreds or even thousands babies are born in every minutes, considering the fact that the death rate is more than birth rate, maybe after many years there would not be enough space for driving cars especially in high populated countries such as India or China. Therefore people will be forced to use public transportation more than now. As we can see in metropolises.
Another prominent reason is that, the speed of producing technology is so high, So in twenty years some different transportation system will be innovated and people would not like to use car any more. We can see now some welfare families in the world who have their personal airplanes, even in developing countries. For example, there are some football players in my country that use their personal plane to travel.
Last but not least, since, the natural environment is destroyed so fast all over the world and its negative effects are so dangerous for all creatures; it contains soil, weather, and water. I assume that in twenty years there would not be any natural resources to live and any soil to build roads. So, there would not be any car to drive.
To put in the nutshell, because of some wrong behavior in using natural resources on one hand and the increasing pace of development in technology on the other hand, there will be fewer cars in use in twenty years.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243401759531 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.143695014663 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0645161290323 0.046263068375 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0410557184751 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126099706745 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0322580645161 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59426753564 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263929618768 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0821114369501 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0293255131965 0.0209618222197 140% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117302052786 0.0139019557991 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1784.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 311.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73633440514 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.279742765273 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.199356913183 0.251872472559 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157556270096 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11575562701 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59426753564 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543408360129 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 56.8395341716 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2142857143 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6513991884 48.84282405 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 42.1499770326 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.61176470588 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299702865836 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0955633769683 0.103427244359 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103832363491 0.0752933317313 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.557177681487 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187768316395 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127730772458 0.114077575197 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117624053606 0.0781384742642 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.287472122923 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0561595585637 0.067059652881 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208581622606 0.210909579961 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802394270053 0.0618886996521 130% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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