Do you agree or disagrees with the following statement?
it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Everyone today since the childhood absorbs information about different things around them. At the beginNing of the education journEy in the elementAry school, educators prefer teaching students about everything. Then, with the time they tend to teach them more specific information regarding each subject. Finally, in the collages and universities students specialized in one field and choose their career. Some people prefer to continue in learIng diffErent subject, while others assert it is too important to specialize in one thing. Personally, I believe in focusing on just one subject in order to be professional in that career.
First of all, the most important thing now a day is getting a good job. To get their dream job, steady job with fancy salary and full benefits, people must be professional, with high level of knowledge in their career. In order to be able to compete in job marketing and persuade the hiring manager that he/she is the correct person for this job. All that need professioncy in their career and that would not happen unless they focus on one subject and dig deep in it to be a high skilled person in his career. To state it more clearly, Job advisors usually encourage work-looking people to focus on their skills at the first place because this is the determining point in choosing the employee and all other skills come after.
Additionally, trying to study more than one subject and be a full-skilled person in them is just wasting of time. Furthermore, humans ability to concentrate on many subjects is low. So, doing that need super power and lead to make the person stressed and overwhelmed all the time. Which in turn, hold him back and prevent him from reaching his goal. Recent newspaper report talked about experience had been doing by some researchers, in this experience, they followed two group of people the first group focused on one field and another group studied more than one subject. Finally, they discovered that the first group did way better, they were more successful even in their personal life than the second group.
Admittedly, sometimes people have to know about different subjects to widen their mind and be successful in their life. Besides, that may open new windows in their future. Despite the benefits, people have to be wise in their choosing of any new subject to study and put the benefits against risk and decide. Actully, it is too hard to find such kind of balance but it worth the try.
Finally, focusing on one subject is more helpful in people life, easier, and bring great outcome rather than distracting themselves with different subjects. Sometimes it is important to have kind of casual knowledge about other subjects, may be related to their majors, but they have to be aware and keep focusing on their career to get the best results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, then, while, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91614255765 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56780984561 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7351626647 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.956521739 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7391304348 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212637349603 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065076587344 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562848278636 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125599157924 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472653356539 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.