he expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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he expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The Expression "never, Never Give Up" Means To Keep Trying And Never Stop Working For Your Goals.

The expression "Never, Never Give Up" is a motivational one liner, which means to keep trying till the end to achieve the goals of life. I agree with the expression and follow in my regular lifestyle. The expression pushes me to limits in order to get the desired results. It always provides the positive energy to face any difficult situation and works as a helper. I have used it in different situations and fields, i.e Education, Sports, Job or any personal problem.

The first time, I read this quote in a book, where a character of the book was struggling in a situation and kept saying himself to never give up. At the end of the story, he succeeded and met with his result. I was in 10th std. at that time and preparing for my board exams. Couple of days later, I were struggling in a mathematics problem, which was an important question too from the exam perspective. I were bit nervous, but at the same time, kept saying to myself to never give up on the challenge. It took me couple of more hours and different approaches to solve the issue. At the end, it not only provided me the confidence to face the similar problems in my exam but also taught me the lesson to never give up.

I have heard many of examples from the past who had the same motto of their life and after long struggle, results were in their favour. There was a Shooter from Germany, who was also a team member of Germany's Olympic Team. In 1936, the Olympic was called off due to WW2 and this athlete was asked to join the military. He was 22 at that time and had the perfect age of an athlete. As the war was on, he was sent to fight with the enemies and lost an eye in a shootout in the battlefield. He was declared as unfit for the army. His passion for shooting was still there and he keeps practicing with one eye. In 1948 Olympics, he was selected in Germany's Olympic team for the shooting event and against all the odds, he won the gold medal. He didn't stop there and won 2 more gold medals in consecutive Olympic events.
The Story always motivate me to follow my passion regardless the odds and injects the thinking of never give up.

The Expression is a motivational quote that always pumps up with confidence. Whenever, I hear this line, I get adrenaline rush in my body in all the difficult situation. It helps me to come up with my best and pushes me to work hard to my extent. I really follow up the quote in my life and consider it as an important lesson.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3987473904 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4871600309 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469728601253 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8763555134 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1071428571 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.39285714286 5.45110844103 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361253713691 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955145336227 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154858064071 0.0737576698707 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261203239201 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.241540777462 0.0645574589148 374% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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