The idea of having a single career is becoming old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Our life changes, our friendships change, our opinions change. How do you think should our career change? Of course, it should. How much time do you think to work for company or having a single business? Haven’t you thought that everything would be different if you would have more money? Please don’t try to deceive me. You have.
Nowadays, everyone around us including ourselves we want to develop in any case. For instance, we would like to have new businesses, new knowledge. Of course, it is not easy but you can do it if you just want. We can come across with some old fashioned people that they wish is to work for enterprise or having a single business. Do you know why? I think they are not enough to bolster and they think that they wouldn’t be able to handle it and they prefer not to even try.
First of all, having own business will assist you to be free, happy and wealthy. Nevertheless, it can be vice verse, but never afraid and never give up. You can do it! Anyway, business will require from you to be patient, be knowledgeable and exacting. Have you mentioned that business will teach you modern life secrets? Yes, it will teach you computer, it will teach you how to control new professionals. Apart from that today living cost is too high to maintain a standard life. Thus, we have to create our own opportunity and try to have a lot of business as possible as we can.
Further education will provide us with a life with high qualities. Education is the only thing that can open every door without a key. Show yourself and go back, all companies will want to have a contract with you. It will not matter how much you want. Anyway, your self will be educated and modern it is most crucial fact.
In conclusion, trying new things and trying to have more will never make you lose something. Never give up and never stop trying.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, thus, apart from, for instance, i think, in conclusion, of course, you know, first of all, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54733727811 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46183181286 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8717898114 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1153846154 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261356148118 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761154345238 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569632729767 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147789883351 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498757446262 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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