If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
The first reason coming to my mind is that, due to the high cost of living, people should have a job in order to meet their basic needs. As matter of fact, if people do not have a secure job, they will have a lot of difficulties in their lives, since the quality of life is becoming increasingly difficult. It is not possible for people to pay their way such as paying bills, housing and buying car and home, all of which make people's lives easier and enjoyable if they have no job. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. There was a time that I had graduated from a famous university in my country, and I wanted to find a job that I love it. Subsequently, I was looking for to find my ideal job, but after one-year searching, I could not find it, and then, I had decided to find an irrelevant job because I could not afford my expenses. For this reason, I strongly believe that due to the difficult quality of life, it is better for people to have a secure job.
Another reason why I agree with it is that there is no guarantee for people to find a satisfying job if they wait for it. Hence, what I am certain is that the stressful situation for finding that job make them nervous. In addition, nowadays, there are a lot of hard mental diseases deriving form waiting for finding a job make them satisfied. For example, when I was a bachelor student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I had an interview with doctor Nejati who is a well-known psychologist in my country. He told me that based on his experience and researchers, nowadays, money is more important for people who are in the searching of a work. He also told me that since people generally have a tendency to have memorable and enjoyable time in their life, they cannot the painful moments of waiting for a job. As a result, the more people have a secure job, the less they bear stress and the quality of their life will increase.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, then, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36141304348 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5480017723 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486413043478 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7576987104 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338203007956 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132702260997 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771331878931 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289563086944 0.150856017488 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179831541178 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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