If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
The answer to this question can be varied from person to person. In my opinion, the benefits of having a secure job clearly outweigh waiting for finding a satisfying job. There are some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason coming to my mind is that, due to the high cost of living, people should have a job in order to meet their basic needs. As matter of fact, if people do not have a secure job, they will have a lot of difficulties in their lives, since the quality of life is becoming increasingly difficult. It is not possible for people to pay their way such as paying bills, housing and buying car and home, all of which make people's lives easier and enjoyable if they have no job. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. There was a time that I had graduated from a famous university in my country, and I wanted to find a job that I love it. Subsequently, I was looking for to find my ideal job, but after one-year searching, I could not find it, and then, I had decided to find an irrelevant job because I could not afford my expenses. For this reason, I strongly believe that due to the difficult quality of life, it is better for people to have a secure job.
Another reason why I agree with it is that there is no guarantee for people to find a satisfying job if they wait for it. Hence, what I am certain is that the stressful situation for finding that job make them nervous. In addition, nowadays, there are a lot of hard mental diseases deriving form waiting for finding a job make them satisfied. For example, when I was a bachelor student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I had an interview with doctor Nejati who is a well-known psychologist in my country. He told me that based on his experience and researchers, nowadays, money is more important for people who are in the searching of a work. He also told me that since people generally have a tendency to have memorable and enjoyable time in their life, they cannot the painful moments of waiting for a job. As a result, the more people have a secure job, the less they bear stress and the quality of their life will increase.
In conclusion, no one can deny the enormous positive effects of having a secure job. Not only are they able to become successful without having any difficulty, but also they are able to prevent a stressful situation from themselves deriving from choosing a various job.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48366013072 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5963283899 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466230936819 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0759693063 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.95 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372427492754 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130637648498 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814744133511 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241848862853 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512119928991 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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