If I could change one important thing about my hometown, it would be reducing level of air pollution. In my hometown, Wu-Chi, where is located just near the fossil-fuel power stations and some industrial factories has been constantly influenced by the pollution which are emitted from them. In this case, reducing levels of air pollution such as carbon dioxide, smog, smoke is a necessary and vital task to do to improve people's heath and make our hometown a livable place.
First of all, one of the important reasons to reduce air pollution is that particulate matter which can cause severe negative impact on human body in a long run. There are many papers of researching in the field of how particulate matter affecting human health. Some said fossil fuels such as coal, oil, and petrol can produce some coarse or fine particles which from the fly ash or the condensation of material vaporized during combustion, and when people inhaled those particles, they can cause serious problems such as allergy, lung cancer, and even asthma.
Second, government and corporate should be most responsible for the air pollution because of the policy and their attitude toward underestimating the negative effects from which factories and fossil fuels can damage our environment and leave our descendants to take those bad results. If we don't have healthy body, eventually there will not be any economic benefit from factories and fossil fuels industry. They shall use the alternative ways to make profit instead of using adverse ways to affect environment even though they may cost much more money in the beginning, but in the long run it may not. By doing so, environment can be sustainable so that we really can make the win-win situation between economy and sustainable development.
Third, it is our obligation to ensure that we leave our descendants a livable, air-freshing, and sustainable surrounding so that they will be able to continue their lives in our home town rather than harmed by air pollution. If the air is fresh and environment is great, people may want to move to our town and that will bring us some economic benefits. If we reduce the levels of the air pollution in our hometown, which also means we contribute to make our world a better place.
To sum up, reducing the levels of air pollution in our hometown is definitely the most important and vital thing to do if I have a chance or power to do so. This change not only can ensure our next generation can live a toxic free lives but also can contribute some efforts to the whole environment and make our surrounding a better place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 684, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: win
...tainable so that we really can make the win win situation between economy and sustainab...
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Line 9, column 232, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
...r next generation can live a toxic free lives but also can contribute some efforts to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, third, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84855233853 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69187006625 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501113585746 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8836380643 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.133333333 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9333333333 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805495826502 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394749260724 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778049526546 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553785815394 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506653501336 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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