If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed
Invention is a very crucial part of human growth. Since, humans are born on the earth invention has been started. Its ongoing process and will not stop in the future. If I would get a chance to invent something, being a student of medical field, I would like to invent a medicine to cure patient from cancer. Now a day, there are certain medicines are available in the market to cure cancer but it work only, when the patient’s diagnosis does early. I will invent medicine, which can cure patient from the last stage of cancer. I will give detain explanation and reasons behind it.
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Its ongoing process and will not stop in the future
It's an ongoing process and will not stop in the future
Its ongoing process will not stop in the future
there are certain medicines are available in the market
there are certain medicines which are available in the market
there are certain medicines available in the market
but it work only
but it works only
New medicine will not only save patient from dying but also it will improve quality of patient’s life
New medicine will not only save patient from dying but also improve the quality of patient’s life
Every patient has right to live normal life as healthy people do.
Every patient has right to live in a normal life as healthy people do.
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