Imagine you could improve the town where you live by changing one important thing about it. Which of the following would you choose to do?
Build additional parks
Construct more libraries
Improve public transportation
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
All of those changes above would definitely be beneficial to my hometown. However, if I really had to choose one, then improving public transportation would be my ultimate choice. I feel this for some reasons that I will delve into in the following essay.
First, improving public transportations enables people in my hometown to travel at ease. Since my hometown is a metropolitan, there are always numerous vehicles driving, causing major congestion on the road every day. Consequently, this issue causes people to arrive late at their workplace or academic institutions. Therefore, by improving public transportation, citizens will divert from using private vehicles to public means of transportations such as buses, helping diminish the number of traffic jams in the city. Without blockage, citizens sitting on buses can travel to their desired destinations smoothly without having to penetrate waves of vehicles.
Second, advanced public transportation can also reduce the air pollution in the city. Private vehicles such as cars or motorcycles exhaust gas containing toxic chemicals into the atmosphere, thereby worsening the quality of air. Since people breathe in the smog from the vehicles, they will be prone to respiratory diseases that can degrade the community’s health as a whole. Improving public transportation can solve this problem owing to the fact that citizens use buses instead of their private vehicles, thereby decreasing the number of cars running on the road. As a result, air pollution can be improved significantly.
Lastly, improving public transportation will bring further convenience to people. This is mainly due to the fact that people do not have to take out their own vehicles, look out for spots to park when they arrive at their locations or buy a new one when it’s stolen. Public transportation will be a decent alternative since there are available drivers that are willing to bring citizens to their destinations on the planned routes and all people need to do is to buy monthly tickets and relax on the bench without worrying about parking issues or having their cars stolen.
In conclusion, enhancing public transportation is my top choice when it comes to improvements that I could add to my hometown since advanced public transportation can help people to reach where they want easily, keep the city air from contamination and give people a sense of convenience.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, look, really, second, so, then, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28051948052 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0498262865 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52987012987 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9580996301 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.588235294 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146900580767 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055733077987 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476079477921 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947865364189 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223824161079 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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