Internet impact on people life
Whether the internet has good impact or bad impact on people is controversial. Some people support the idea that the internet is beneficial. On the other hand, Others argue that the disadvantages of the internet over-weighing the advantages of it. In my opinion. The internet has a good impact on people life. I fell this way for two main reason, which I will explore in this essay.
To begin with, the internet contains huge amount of information on different discipline such as science, medicine and literature.people can access information and data stored on the internet easily and immediately. As a result, learning experience of people is becoming easier and more convenient. In contrast, people was traveling a long distances in order to read a book that is exist only in a one library in the world. The were spending money and time just to get a piece of information. But with the advent of the internet you can search for the same information using your smartphone or while you are drinking your favorite coffee with your wife. For that, I believe that the internet made people life easier than before.
Secondly,the internet made the communication between people more convenient and cheaper. Before the internet, people were using the traditional mailing system in order to send messages, or they have to pay a considerable amount of money to make an overseas phone call for several minutes. On the other hand, nowadays, people are talking to each other using free apps that can be installed and run on their person devices, smartphones and computers. People can make not voice calls over the internet, but also they are able to make a real time video call. This really change people life. My life is an example of this. When my father traveled to work in another country. before the internet we talked to him once every week and only for couple of minutes, but after we used the internet service, we were able to talk to him on daily basis and for hours with a very low cost.
To sum up, I think that the internet improved people life a lot. This because of the easy access to knowledge and information, and because internet removed the barriers between people and made the communication between different countries easier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
... and immediately. As a result, learning experience of people is becoming easier and more c...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...stances in order to read a book that is exist only in a one library in the world. The...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ple life easier than before. Secondly,the internet made the communication between...
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Line 5, column 619, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le life. My life is an example of this. When my father traveled to work in another c...
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Line 5, column 671, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Before
...er traveled to work in another country. before the internet we talked to him once ever...
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Line 5, column 811, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed the internet service, we were able to talk to him on daily basis and for hours...
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Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion between different countries easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84375 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71976752989 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518229166667 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.973607348 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5454545455 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50801913704 0.236089414692 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17651929781 0.076458572812 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189031913167 0.0737576698707 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340388320848 0.150856017488 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106605418611 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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