Many teenagers have trouble with what to do in the future. So when they grow up, they probably find a job that is either similar to their parents or related to their personal interests. From my perspective, I would like to express myself in choosing a job that the same as their parents. And I will demonstrate my opinion in the following paragraphs.
If we search a job being resemble to our parents, they can give us more useful advice to avoid some unnecessary problems at the beginning of the career. Since parents are experienced, when having some trouble, they can offer help to us. For example, I used to do a job depending on my interests. And it is a hard time for me because there are a lot of problems which drove me crazy and no one can give me suggestion. I even cannot have a good sleep at that time since I have to work late everyday to solve these problems. Finally, I decide to do a job that is similar to my father. I did not feel stressed because when I encountering trouble, my father always can give me some advice from his experience, which reduced much pressure to me.
In addition, we can have more topics to talk about, making family closer together. Although many people want to promote the relationship between their parents and themselves, they do not know how to deal with it and what to said to parents, mainly because they do not have common language with their parents. If we engaged in the same work as parents, the relationship can be greatly improved. For instance, once I did a job that is nothing to do with my parents' job. Though I am interested in that, I had few topics can talk to my parents. After that, I think I had to do some change because I felt uncomfortable to have a estranged relationship with my parents. At last, I engaged in a job being similar to my parents'. We had more topics to discuss and created a warm atmosphere at home, which makes me feel happy and comfortable.
Finally, we can make more friends in this field through parents, which is good for our further development. Due to the fierce competition in a job market, having more friends in this field can be a big help for us such as having a promotion. For example, I used to work in a company. Through my parents, I knew many workers and executives in this company. Once the boss want to let someone to finish a important task, but he cannot decide who did it. And many people recommended me because of my ability and the good relationship with them. Of course I did it perfectly and was appreciated by my boss. At last, I got the promotion that is very difficult for most people.
In summary, according to the concrete analysis, my opinion is that choosing a job which is the same as parents is better than different from them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... at that time since I have to work late everyday to solve these problems. Finally, I dec...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...r. I did not feel stressed because when I encountering trouble, my father always ...
^
Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ge because I felt uncomfortable to have a estranged relationship with my parents....
^
Line 7, column 401, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the boss want to let someone to finish a important task, but he cannot decide wh...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in summary, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44881889764 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69873490109 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44094488189 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4735121729 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7142857143 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60714285714 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24546125842 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762327892833 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105276859212 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183557795162 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938254577928 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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