It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay
Considering the wide spectrum of interests and attitudes among people, different people will respond to this question differently. Some may hold an opinion that countryside is a more suitable place for children. While others have a relative negative point of view. As far as I am concerned, broadly speaking, I think a big city could be more appropriate for children. But providing a precise answer requires a much more information about the various aspects of the countryside. I will try to make my position more clear by the following reasons.
One of the primary reason is that, living in the countryside may keep away children from many important things which are necessary for them to grow better. There are many important factors which are solely related to the big cities. For example, in most countries, high ranked universities and schools are placed in big cities. Needles to say that if you want your children to be sufficiently prepared for future, then you need your children to attend high ranked schools. It is highly probable that the countryside is far from the nearest big city and therefore everyday traveling to city is not logical.
Second, living in a big city automatically provide children with a huge amount of information about modern technology. It is obvious, a person who want to get a important job in such a big city, he/she should be completely prepared in advance. When he/she has not sufficient knowledge about modern technology, then he/she could not pursue a hi-tech related field in the future. People who are Living in the countryside, specially those which are far from the nearest big cit, usually suffer from lacking modern information. And this issues strengthen the view that living in the countryside is not better than living in a big city, specially for children.
There is more subtle point we should consider. Although, the countryside may keep people away from some necessary information, they provide people with few other vital things. For example, people who live in big cities usually suffer from air pollution. Overall, environment in the countryside is much less polluted. This issued is very vital for children, because it is scientific that any pollution in environment can affect children considerably in a negative way.
All in all, if the above reasons are contemplated, we easily reach the conclusion that, although people who live countryside benefit from healthy environmental condition, they suffer from modern information which are necessary for people who want to get a appropriate hi-tech related job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re necessary for people who want to get a appropriate hi-tech related job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, while, broadly speaking, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14558472554 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84726237178 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498806682578 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7810287805 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0454545455 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211777003232 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652991409158 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655151913562 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120643968775 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637228544463 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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