Is it better to have a job where you work only three day a week for long hours that to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Since the dawn of civilizations, people have worked at different jobs, and this jobs have played significant role in personal life of people. However, one of the most important milestones of recent decades is the change in people perspective toward life. This change had led to a controversial question regarding works and jobs. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that it is better to work only three days a week for long hours, while others think that it is better to work five days a week for shorter hours. Personally I am more in agreement with the former ones. In the following paragraphs, some conspicuous reasons will cogently substantiate my perspective.
The first noteworthy point regarding the issue is the economic hardships of today life. When someone arrange his week in a way that he needs to work at a job only for three days, he can look for a second job to make life more pleasant for himself. For instance, I work in an office. I try to do my weekly tasks in three days, so in other days of week I have the opportunity to work as a teacher. The salary that I earn from my second job, has make life better for me.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that when people work only three days a week, they have enough free days in each week to assign adequately time to their family and friends. I remember, one of my co-worker who arranged his time at work in a way that he worked only three days a week. In this way, he had enough time to put aside a day in each week to be with his children with no stress from work related tasks. Moreover, he had enough time to assign a day just to himself.
Finally, in addition to what was mentioned above, as recent studies have revealed, people who work fewer days a week are more relaxed. In fact, this study which was conducted in Denmark on one thousand office workers, revealed that roughly 80 percent of people who work 5 days a week have some kind of personality issues, some things like anxiety, and these people periodically use psychologists’ services. On the other hand, the same study shows that this percent is much lower, about 30 percent, among people who work only three days a week.
To make a long story short, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that it is better to work fewer days for longer hours. However, that was a story in nutshell; actually there are some other reasons and examples, challenging the claim, which are not mentioned above. Finally, it is suggested that a survey be conducted to find out the exact factors involved in this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'arranges'.
Suggestion: arranges
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237451737452 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.148648648649 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0733590733591 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0579150579151 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0540540540541 0.0685040099705 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123552123552 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.030888030888 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55844935116 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034749034749 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.003861003861 0.00188951952338 204% => OK
Determiners: 0.106177606178 0.0887237588012 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.003861003861 0.0209618222197 18% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.019305019305 0.0139019557991 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2578.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 465.0 408.028673835 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54408602151 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286021505376 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.18064516129 0.251872472559 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139784946237 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0838709677419 0.112833075102 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55844935116 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475268817204 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.7261974608 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1428571429 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0592446866 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.761904762 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 40.2073732719 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.5037037037 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390474259843 0.300154397459 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116244084759 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0887987358087 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51540104109 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133790226885 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142923837743 0.114077575197 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131033047237 0.0781384742642 168% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.326966496747 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0594353633383 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256065762242 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524567607714 0.0618886996521 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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