Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, our modern life is much more complicated than the past and modern societies or grops need a good leader. In my opinion, learning and education are critical factor for a person who wants to became a leader. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explor in the following essay.
First of all, great leaders in the world have a strong knowledge in leadership and they have been achieved their goals because of having a good educational program. There is no doubt, that without education a person cann't be aware of everything related to leadering a group and a leader have to know about managment, human resources, facilities and competitor assumptions which are not possible without learning and spending time in educational programs. For example, we all know about leaders who lead big companies such as Microsoft, Google, Apple and others because of social media we read about them. They are well aducated and smart person and the always learn from their feiluiers. In addition they have a lot of advisers to help them when situations are worse to be successful in the bissuness. this example demonestrates that leadership doesn’t come naturally and for becaming a good leader you need more than your DNA and hope.
Second, popular leaders in the history were old people and they had a lot of experience to lead community. This is obvious that human gets experience by learning from different event in a lot of situations. An important example of this leadership is well known leader of India. He did not became a good leader by chance and he had a lot of knowledge and beliefs which are earned by learning. For instance, my brother is a young leader of a company in a large city and he has seventy workers. he is very successful in his business and has a good relationship with his workers. but all of this is not come naturally because he has been working in the industry for thirty years and he started as a simple assistant and learned a lot during these years. Thus, for being a successful leader we should spend time and also hardworking is a key to get positive result.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that if a person wants to be a leader should think about a appropriate academic and get experience by working years in the industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74055415617 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70615027425 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506297229219 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0182991206 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189487950928 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626369164389 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528552614452 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108956437143 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456691835123 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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