Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Across the world, many crucial natural resources, for instance animals, forests, and fresh water, have been severely depleted so as to meet the increasing demand of the growing population. Among the resources, there is a stark scarcity of clean water. Today, nearly one billion people in the third world do not have access to the fresh water. However, it is vital to our health, economy, and community above all.
Our hygienic lifestyle is pivot on clean water. To put it another way, fresh water is a basic human need. Each individual requires at least twenty to fifty litres of safe, clean water a day for cooking, drinking, and simple keeping themselves clean. On the contrary, every week so far 30,000 deaths occur due to the scarcity of clean, safe water. To cap it all, a large extent of population are seriously sickened by a host of waterborne diseases, which in turn limits people’s true potential. Clean water, thus, is very essential to human civilization.
Similarly, water has a ripple effect through our economy. That is to say that clean water is an economic driver. It plays a vital role to manufacturing, tourism, energy production, and farming above all. Each and every manufacturing company requires a great deal of water. For example, beer brewers pivot on clean water, which is more than 90 percent of the beer. Likewise, aquatic recreation, nowadays, is a big business, and contributes to tourism significantly. In addition to this, it goes without saying that water is the linchpin of agriculture. Farmers depend on clean and reliable water for irrigation, crops, and livestock. Apart from that, water is very essential to producing energy. That is to say, water is a vital element to generate hydroelectric power, and power, indeed, plays the pivotal role in modern economy.
In fine, water is the most essential substance sustaining human life. Besides being essential to our healthy lifestyle, water also streamlines life in enormous other ways. Without it, we cannot imagine a single day, as we could not cook our meal, grow crops, and keep livestock. Water also contributes to advancing the civilization, providing the source of power. In short, water is life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...resh water, have been severely depleted so as to meet the increasing demand of the growi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'likewise', 'similarly', 'so', 'third', 'thus', 'apart from', 'as to', 'at least', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in short', 'on the contrary', 'that is to say']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235023041475 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.13133640553 0.158761421928 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.126728110599 0.0866891130778 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0460829493088 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0322580645161 0.0685040099705 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0944700460829 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0322580645161 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73876046572 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0391705069124 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0875576036866 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00460829493088 0.0209618222197 22% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00460829493088 0.0139019557991 33% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2197.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 362.0 408.028673835 89% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06906077348 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367403314917 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259668508287 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190607734807 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124309392265 0.112833075102 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73876046572 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582872928177 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 67.208765955 59.2087087015 114% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.48 20.5533526081 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6124921902 48.84282405 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.88 120.699889404 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.48 20.5533526081 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.76 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 40.4468508287 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.72527472527 1.45489161554 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377166214307 0.300154397459 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.06348783132 0.103427244359 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0578268882946 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.454631176671 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115205604265 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131565642577 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514609051546 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399570568957 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.048872334036 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26523750946 0.210909579961 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668695408648 0.0618886996521 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.